::sighs, points to penname:: I am not to be blamed for the failings of the story, kay? But I'm sure Irin would be happy to hear your thoughts on the story. By all appearances it's not a parody, though it does seem to be rather odd.

Saber? I can't really give a good bitching on plot or character for anything she's written because I always stall about five lines in with the judgment that it's pretentious overwritten barely legible crap. FFN may be the pit of voles, but Serebii is the swamp of Epic Fail.