Infuriatingly, the first one wasn't even defending a particularly bad story (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4715139/1/). I mean, it's not exactly good, either, but most of the stuff I'm pointing out would be easily fixed and tends to be unrelated to the main storyline.
The second is a short aside to one of Celebi96's fics (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4718467/1/). Which is to say, it could work decently if it was the first chapter to a longer story that'd develop whatever it's going on about, but it's not and that longer story is already around elsewhere and already explains it there. What it is right now is basically fanfic for his fanfic. (If you look at the reviews, you'll see Celebi correcting their characterization).
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The second is a short aside to one of Celebi96's fics (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4718467/1/). Which is to say, it could work decently if it was the first chapter to a longer story that'd develop whatever it's going on about, but it's not and that longer story is already around elsewhere and already explains it there. What it is right now is basically fanfic for his fanfic. (If you look at the reviews, you'll see Celebi correcting their characterization).