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Authors, Part 12
Name: LittleSapphireButterfly
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2137529/
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Subject: Review
Thank you for your opinion and critism on my story:) I went back and changed
the things you suggested. Yeah, and not beginning the story with them getting
their starter is something I'm trying to figure out how to do in a good way,
since pretty much everyone does that.
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Name: K-chanLovesAnimeXD
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2163675/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Mew's Story
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5886568/
thanks for the CC, but u don't have to be so harsh about it.
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Name: KitsPokePeople
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2184360/
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Subject: re: Your review to A Fairytale Gone Wrong
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5887077/
Okay I know that I already sent a "PM" to you. But I just want to say a few
things.
1) You don't have to cus.
2) The reason I put it there was because of my cruddy humor.
3) If you had ACTUALLY read ON, you would have NOTICED that I KNEW what the
cover of a sword used when the sword is not in use is called a scabbard.
4) Saying that "or just to be awestruck you're capable of any form of learning
at all" is a form of saying that you think I'm stupid.
5) If you don't like the story. DON'T READ IT! I DON'T NEED THE CRUD! If you
want t give THAT much of a grammer lesson be a language arts teacher. (No
effence intended)
So how is that? I explained EVERYTHING.
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Name: Redtutel
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2053429/
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Subject: RE: Pokeball Hearts Review
That just hurt. I'm still new to writing for fanfiction, and I gave up on my
fist story. I don't want to give up on this one too. You can give my help, but
plese, don't give me flames. fogive me is I'm not a very good speller.
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Name: Writerswand
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2157716/
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Subject: Your reveiw...
Thank you for the criticism. I'll take that to mind when writing other
chapters. "Dialogue does not make up a story," Yeah...I know...*sigh* I know
about 'showing' the story instead of just 'telling' it. Supposedly I'm really
good with scene and 'showing' the story I just got lazy with this piece...
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Title: As Luck Would Have It
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5887546/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1941225/
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what are you? My grammar teacher? A simple "you need to look at your grammar
again," would have sufficed. The only review in this review was "I LOLed.
There's a difference between drama and melodrama. Randomly having everything
bad happen at once is not the way to get across how serious business it is."
This isn't supposed to be a drama, and I'm not trying to say how serious it
is. It's just part of the story, so enjoy it.
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Name: BassRulerOfTheUnderNet
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1993223/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon and the path of secrets Jade's story
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5883724/
Well I'm sorry Farla, but I'm new and my head is as empty as a nut shell. So I
can't make amazing stories.Plus,not everyone is perfect. Your words persuade
me to delete this story more then ever.
Yet it makes me want to revise more of my work. Thank you Farla for your wise
words.
I'm sorry for my grammer if you find any mistakes in this message.
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Name: Sunslicer2
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2062830/
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Subject: Thank you!
Seriously, you start yelling at me for having a short chapter, when you
yourself have a chapter almost equal in length to that one in one of your
stories! and did you ever think I wanted to build up why that event happened
later in the story? Did you ever think about whyIi could have chosen a Cubone
for this? Apparently you didn't.
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One day, authors will realize that people only read stories if they want to, and that insisting everyone stick around to the end to see if it's actually a fuckup or just looks like one is absurd.
Today is not that day.
Title: The Magnet of Rivals
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5888543/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1610828/
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Your face is unreadable. Either say something nice or don't say it at all.
k thanx
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Name: DragonTamer94
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2089165/
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Subject: review response
Well, I agree but still. It was just a prologue, and I think if you were to
hear the whole story it would make more sense. Besides that, who isn't going
to put Paul OOC for a little while? By the way, should I consider your review
a flame or just pointing something out? The way you put it seemed a little
harsh.
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Name: define-originality
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2308336/
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Subject: re: Your review to Lost Souls, Intertwined
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5888747/
Thank you for your review and critcisms. As I stated at the beginning of the
first chapter, I don't claim to be an expert, so some things may not be
entirely accurate. Take vulpixs' colour, on the game it's brown with orange
tails. So that is the description I used.
I have taken into account that the typhlosion would be greatly weakened by the
water, however (and perhaps i should have mentioned it :S) he survived, just.
When he was attacked, he was able to be so easily, due to that weakness. You
did point that out, so I thought you may have realized that, sorry for not
being clear.
As for trainers starting at 10 years, again I refer to the note I put at the
beginning of the first chapter. I go by the games. It does not specify what
age trainers start. I'm sorry if it is inaccurate, but I did say i am no
expert and apologized for getting it wrong. I apologize again.
Finally, I have taken your constructive criticism into account, regarding Mum
with a capital m, and the speech ending in a comma if continuous. I have never
been taught that (the speech thing), but I take it into consideration and will
try my best to correct it for future chapters. I'm not perfect, but I will
try.
Again, I would like to thank you for taking the time to read my fanfic and for
taking the time to review it and help correct it. Just to remind you again,
though, I did state that I wasn't an expert and I would be going by the games.
Therefore, if any other future references of pokemon or the pokemon world
aren't entirely accurate, you are welcome to point this out, but I do
apologize. I am no expert.
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Title: Rag Dolls
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5885713/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2310393/
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Thank you for the review. But story wise how do you think its going or it it
too soon to tell.
And I shall, you have a link on your profile that solves that problem so thank
you.
Thank you for your critism, I was aware that something among those lines was a
weak spot of mine but I really didn't have anywhere to confrim this.
Afro-dreads.
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Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2137529/
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Subject: Review
Thank you for your opinion and critism on my story:) I went back and changed
the things you suggested. Yeah, and not beginning the story with them getting
their starter is something I'm trying to figure out how to do in a good way,
since pretty much everyone does that.
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Name: K-chanLovesAnimeXD
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2163675/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Mew's Story
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5886568/
thanks for the CC, but u don't have to be so harsh about it.
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Name: KitsPokePeople
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2184360/
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Subject: re: Your review to A Fairytale Gone Wrong
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5887077/
Okay I know that I already sent a "PM" to you. But I just want to say a few
things.
1) You don't have to cus.
2) The reason I put it there was because of my cruddy humor.
3) If you had ACTUALLY read ON, you would have NOTICED that I KNEW what the
cover of a sword used when the sword is not in use is called a scabbard.
4) Saying that "or just to be awestruck you're capable of any form of learning
at all" is a form of saying that you think I'm stupid.
5) If you don't like the story. DON'T READ IT! I DON'T NEED THE CRUD! If you
want t give THAT much of a grammer lesson be a language arts teacher. (No
effence intended)
So how is that? I explained EVERYTHING.
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Name: Redtutel
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2053429/
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Subject: RE: Pokeball Hearts Review
That just hurt. I'm still new to writing for fanfiction, and I gave up on my
fist story. I don't want to give up on this one too. You can give my help, but
plese, don't give me flames. fogive me is I'm not a very good speller.
--------------------
Name: Writerswand
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2157716/
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Subject: Your reveiw...
Thank you for the criticism. I'll take that to mind when writing other
chapters. "Dialogue does not make up a story," Yeah...I know...*sigh* I know
about 'showing' the story instead of just 'telling' it. Supposedly I'm really
good with scene and 'showing' the story I just got lazy with this piece...
--------------------
Title: As Luck Would Have It
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5887546/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1941225/
--------------------
what are you? My grammar teacher? A simple "you need to look at your grammar
again," would have sufficed. The only review in this review was "I LOLed.
There's a difference between drama and melodrama. Randomly having everything
bad happen at once is not the way to get across how serious business it is."
This isn't supposed to be a drama, and I'm not trying to say how serious it
is. It's just part of the story, so enjoy it.
--------------------
Name: BassRulerOfTheUnderNet
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1993223/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon and the path of secrets Jade's story
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5883724/
Well I'm sorry Farla, but I'm new and my head is as empty as a nut shell. So I
can't make amazing stories.Plus,not everyone is perfect. Your words persuade
me to delete this story more then ever.
Yet it makes me want to revise more of my work. Thank you Farla for your wise
words.
I'm sorry for my grammer if you find any mistakes in this message.
--------------------
Name: Sunslicer2
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2062830/
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Subject: Thank you!
Seriously, you start yelling at me for having a short chapter, when you
yourself have a chapter almost equal in length to that one in one of your
stories! and did you ever think I wanted to build up why that event happened
later in the story? Did you ever think about whyIi could have chosen a Cubone
for this? Apparently you didn't.
--------------------
One day, authors will realize that people only read stories if they want to, and that insisting everyone stick around to the end to see if it's actually a fuckup or just looks like one is absurd.
Today is not that day.
Title: The Magnet of Rivals
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5888543/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1610828/
--------------------
Your face is unreadable. Either say something nice or don't say it at all.
k thanx
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Name: DragonTamer94
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2089165/
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Subject: review response
Well, I agree but still. It was just a prologue, and I think if you were to
hear the whole story it would make more sense. Besides that, who isn't going
to put Paul OOC for a little while? By the way, should I consider your review
a flame or just pointing something out? The way you put it seemed a little
harsh.
--------------------
Name: define-originality
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2308336/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Lost Souls, Intertwined
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5888747/
Thank you for your review and critcisms. As I stated at the beginning of the
first chapter, I don't claim to be an expert, so some things may not be
entirely accurate. Take vulpixs' colour, on the game it's brown with orange
tails. So that is the description I used.
I have taken into account that the typhlosion would be greatly weakened by the
water, however (and perhaps i should have mentioned it :S) he survived, just.
When he was attacked, he was able to be so easily, due to that weakness. You
did point that out, so I thought you may have realized that, sorry for not
being clear.
As for trainers starting at 10 years, again I refer to the note I put at the
beginning of the first chapter. I go by the games. It does not specify what
age trainers start. I'm sorry if it is inaccurate, but I did say i am no
expert and apologized for getting it wrong. I apologize again.
Finally, I have taken your constructive criticism into account, regarding Mum
with a capital m, and the speech ending in a comma if continuous. I have never
been taught that (the speech thing), but I take it into consideration and will
try my best to correct it for future chapters. I'm not perfect, but I will
try.
Again, I would like to thank you for taking the time to read my fanfic and for
taking the time to review it and help correct it. Just to remind you again,
though, I did state that I wasn't an expert and I would be going by the games.
Therefore, if any other future references of pokemon or the pokemon world
aren't entirely accurate, you are welcome to point this out, but I do
apologize. I am no expert.
------------------
Title: Rag Dolls
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5885713/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2310393/
--------------------
Thank you for the review. But story wise how do you think its going or it it
too soon to tell.
And I shall, you have a link on your profile that solves that problem so thank
you.
Thank you for your critism, I was aware that something among those lines was a
weak spot of mine but I really didn't have anywhere to confrim this.
Afro-dreads.
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