PR rewrite

Dec. 9th, 2007 01:10 am
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Looking over Ch16, it's just a mess. I get the impression I was rushing, because there's a lot of jumping about and really poor setup. About half the scenes are fleshed out properly, and the others are just short expositionary pieces.

Initially I thought this was bad but it gives me more room to work. I just have to check over the next chapter to see what absolutely needs to be included this chapter.

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