Authors, Part 13

[farla]

Title: Harry Potter and Pokemon, Friends, and Voldemort
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5889172/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1470916/
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thanks for your words
And I know it makes no sense crossing the two
but My cross over is the first of its kind, and I was hoping it would inspire
people to write more story`s with a similar storyline.
Most Harry Potter pokemon X over`s are either Harry some goes to the pokemon
world, or Harry is born in the pokemon.
and there is Pokemon come to Hogwarts, but not in Harry`s first year. they
come in his last or sixth.
and Finally there are the story`s were some of the pokemon charecters get
invited or are forced to come to Hogwarts


I know I make mistakes, but you got to give me credit for not being that
overly terrible. I`ve read story`s were charecters are completely OOC, and the
entire thing is written in TEXT speech EX brb lol.
Peace out

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Title: Kevin and Buizel
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5890711/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2320252/
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Finnaly someone reviews this story as it should've been, I was getting really
tired of the same old "awesome!" and "This is great!" replied out in
Deviantart and Furaffinity, so I thank you alot for the extense review.

Okay, let me start replying.

Okay.
Okay.
Wow... okay, umm... I am going to have to analyze that one tomorrow at
collegue O_O And, the reason I use the -'s instead of the "'s is mainly
because they tought me that way here.
It would actually seem that Kevin is an insecure whiner beause that was the
first impression I tried to give him, he actually thinks that he is not good
and for a reason finds quite strange how so many people liked his music, it
also had to do with him becoming famous too quickly in younger days. And,
yeah, I never liked to describe battles, hehe. I just don't like to freeze the
image in the story too much time.

Thans a ton for the reviwe again Sue! very useful indeed!!

~Scott

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...Well, at least by appearances they're not a native English speaker.

You have received a reply from the author, Mantineus, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: SatanPaulWhat More can go Wrong?
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5890513/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1022018/
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Good. I'm glad someone agrees with me. Yes, I was hoping it would be funny,
but it was going down a road where it lacked and I just wrote crap, hoping
that from that crap would sprout something worth reading. Instead, it didn't
and I thought the psycho Dawn scenes would at least be worth it.

Yet, one has to wonder; if they knew this was a badfic, why did they read it?
Why did they just skip it or humor the summary and read the fics it asked them
to?

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Name: Mantineus
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1022018/
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Subject: Hello

Hello, Farla, at last we meet. I must admit that I-and my friend Tamah-respect
you. I am writing this because I was reminded of whom you are and writing that
if you wrote that to be hurtful; I feel you could have done better( believe
me, I have been told worse). I jump to this conclusion, because it was not
constructive at all(like the ones you have done with my associate and friend,
Tamah).

Which brings me to my next point. I bow to you, for not giving me an
annonymous review saying that. Not many do that so my hat(if I ever wore one)
is off to you. I will point out that that particular fic was the fourth in a
not-so-connected series of oneshots. I only state this because I am hoping you
looked over my other fics(at least their summaries) and some made you look
disgusted, because then I know I can actually make people feel that way. Case
in point; my new cavaliershipping fic, "Fallen Angel".

I do hope to see more reviews from you(if you have the time), for they amuse
me. I do hope that this does not offend you, for I hold each and every review
my stories recieve with high regards and thus, this was not my intention.

Until next time.

M.

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Title: Serum 418
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5891018/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2321008/
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Thanks for the review, and I agree, plot is next to non-existent in this
chapter. It's a fault of mine, since I never really saw a plot behind a
transformation. However, most of my experience comes from elsewhere, so it
might look out-of-place here. Oh well, this is very much a learning experience
for me, so I'm sorry if it isn't up to spec.

I had him wake up seconds before he was injected because of the sudden
increase in activity in the facility. The sudden introduction of machinery
noises and bright light, to be exact. I'll watch out for grammar as the story
goes along, thanks for taking the time to point out how to do it!

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Yeah, I kind of guessed as much. You know people, if you want to write transformation kink not-porn, that's all well and good but it's kind of annoying to just stumble over.

Name: Kaze no Kyuuten
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1610898/
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Subject: re: Your review to A New Journey

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5891031/

if you don't like it don't read it

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Name: PhoenixstarKina
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2107918/
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Subject: re: Your review to Not so High School

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5890600/

umm....yea I don't get what you're saying....are you some critic? Because we
are allowed to post a story focusing on OCs if it contains at least one
character from the original movie/show/anime/book ect. I know because half of
my stoires focus on a OC and none of them have been taken down or removed.
Most people write with OCs as the main character. I helped EC write this story
and if you don't like it then don't comment or read it.

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Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: PhoenixstarKina ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2107918/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=102288897
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...focuses too much on an OC...don't even get the plot to the story...badly
written.
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Name: ModnartheJuba
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1810674/
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Subject: re: Your review to Another Trainer

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5890459/

I do get what you are saying, however, Team Rocket didn't randomly show up.
That's the point of the show where they actually do. If you have actually
watched the show, you would know that. Also, Pokemon is suppose to be
captialized for it is the name of the species. And each individual name is a
pronoun. I understand you are trying to give me some tips to write better;
however, try and realize that I was just showing what Kevin can actually do.
That's it. And there are plenty of characters that can and do know more than
Ash. So Kevin explaining about the torch shouldn't be that big of a deal.
And misspelling happens all the time to people. So I misspelled some words
and a Pokemon's name. *sarcastically* Oh no, the world is doomed. Mistakes
do happen and we learn from them.

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Name: Neucom executive
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2280835/
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Subject: review

Dude I'm really grateful for reviewing my story. I'll do my best to include
all details you've focused on. Thanks again!

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But after all that, we dip back into bizarroverse once again.

Comments

[antialiasis.livejournal.com]

I love how that one guy assumed by "Sue" you were just signing your review.

Also, what the hell, isn't this the second person to argue Pokémon names should be capitalized on the basis that "they're pronouns"? o_O

[farla.livejournal.com]

Yeah, it's particularly -_- given that the "sue" wasn't even in a separate line the way people would sign a name. But they're obviously not the best with English, so it's more understandable than usual.

...I don't know, that's the first time I remember the exact names = pronouns and pronouns = capitalized bit, but I tend to just stop reading the arguments as soon as they make their first error. It does sound familiar.

[purplekitte.livejournal.com]

I'm just going to pretend they were searching for the phrase "proper nouns." (See, my reason for capitalization of them is very simple and not as well-explained as your reasons not to: doing otherwise feels deeply wrong to me.)

[ember-reignited.livejournal.com]

I love how that one guy assumed by "Sue" you were just signing your review. That was my favorite part as well.

[farla.livejournal.com]

One person assumed my name was Stu after I ended a comment with that on oc_analysis.

That was special.

[wonsab.livejournal.com]

The fact that there were two Sues with my name in the same day makes me rather sad.

[farla.livejournal.com]

You're badass cold-glare giving super trainer who's an awesome but insecure musician in a very "special" relationship with your buizel, how could this make you sad?

[charizamdc.livejournal.com]

Personally, I'm always amused by responses like the first. It's as if they think their heart is being weighed against a feather rather than, say, their 'fic being critiqued.