Authors, Part 18

[farla]

Name: xXLuvMeHateMeXx
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1967469/
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Subject: re: Your review to Love

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5890769/

I'm a kid, my friend. I don't know what the fuck I'm doing!! D: And I don't
know a word you just said...

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Name: TPW.admin-Brix
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2067326/
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Subject: re: Your review to Ladoh Region Adventures

Pokemon are made to have NAMES. So yes, you would capitilize a name, would you
not? Another thing- if youre sittin down readin a book, a new paragraph doesnt
mean a new speaker. Youre tryin to correct my grammar, when its perfectly
fine. But stuff like sayin readin is jus cuz im from the south.

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Name: TPW.admin-Brix
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2067326/
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Subject: sry

Sorry if I was kinda harsh when I argued about your review. My friend on
FanFiction told me that if some1 gives me a review, I should ask whats wrong
with it. So, even though youve been pretty pacific, could you give me more
advice? Not on grammar or anything, but on making the story more on the edge
of the seat-like interesting. Thanks and like I said:
1)Paragraphs are good so you dont have a big wall of txt
2)If its a name, its capatilized
But aside from all of this, I just want your help

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Story: Butterfly Wings
Chapter: 17. Trickmaster

From: Jacob: DON'TTOUCCHMYTRUNK!!!!! ()
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The crackfic writers of Pong write better than you!!
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Oh noes, guys, my review count was inflated again. Rather subdued overall, I guess the crazy allotment was worked out over on the forum.

Comments

[banzaisebastian.livejournal.com]

So, even though youve been pretty pacific

Hee.

[midnitesaboteur.livejournal.com]

Youre tryin to correct my grammar, when its perfectly
fine. But stuff like sayin readin is jus cuz im from the south.

... But stuff like saying reading is just because...

[raises pointer finger, opens mouth] [closes mouth, tilts head] [blinks]

[ember-reignited.livejournal.com]

Try putting quotation marks around "readin." They're defending their decision to write in dialect. (Which there is sometimes a defense for, but "just cuz im from the south" doesn't quite pass muster.)

[farla.livejournal.com]

The worst part is, I didn't even say anything about their grammar (http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5895285/).

[midnitesaboteur.livejournal.com]

And his newest chapter is quite the... masterpiece.