Do you ever start to wonder whether or not you could convince a jury it was justifiable homicide?

[farla]

Okay. I mentioned BluKraze a couple days ago. Yesterday he emailed me to say he'd 're-done' the story. By which he meant he'd written an unrelated story and replaced his older story with it. He then informed he he'd taken 'all' of my advice and to go read the story.

Go look. I counted about thirty spelling errors, including two in the summary.

Although I have to give him some credit. It can't be easy to get "fallped" out of "flapped" and I'm still a bit curious about how he turned "attack" into "attact", seeing as the 't' and 'k' are not only nowhere near each other, they're typed with different hands. (He also managed to misspell 'again' each of the four times he used it.) In case anyone had any delusions he should be left alive, he ends the story with And I enjoy constructive cristism, because that's very helpful.

Forget 'get out of my fandom'. I want this guy out of my species.

Comments

[razorleaf.livejournal.com]

I feel your pain.

[katei3.livejournal.com]

Story not found. >3 Gee, wonder why?

I'm tempted to make an icon out of your last sentence.

[farla.livejournal.com]

I don't know if it was removed (forget if there's a lockout period on the first offense) or if he deleted it, because there's another version of the story up already. It's a completely different story (again, or, as he would put it, agian) which is no better than the last two.

[mametsubu.livejournal.com]

Well look at what i did.



Mindbreakmuch?

I love making icons nobody will use. :D

[farla.livejournal.com]

^^ I'm greatly amused.