Ch5 of Pokemon Revolution

[farla]

So Chaper Five of Pokemon Revolution is up. And then edited and reuploaded because of a small mistake. And then edited again and reuploaded because of another small mistake.

But it's done now. Or it had damn well better be.

Now for Ch6, which looks like it'll be a complete rewrite. I'd forgotten just how awful my dialogue was.

(And why did I think it was a good idea to have a pidgeot there to help take Mt. Moon? I want a time machine just so I can smack myself over the head.)

Comments

[kddreams.livejournal.com]

It's okay. You were stupid. We were all stupid when we're younger. And when we look back ten years from now, we'll be stupid too.

[farla.livejournal.com]

Yes, but the most annoying thing was that I just wasn't thinking. It's not a matter of not realizing, but of not bothering to realize.