Ch5 of Pokemon Revolution
Oct. 8th, 2006 03:18 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
farlaSo Chaper Five of Pokemon Revolution is up. And then edited and reuploaded because of a small mistake. And then edited again and reuploaded because of another small mistake.
But it's done now. Or it had damn well better be.
Now for Ch6, which looks like it'll be a complete rewrite. I'd forgotten just how awful my dialogue was.
(And why did I think it was a good idea to have a pidgeot there to help take Mt. Moon? I want a time machine just so I can smack myself over the head.)
But it's done now. Or it had damn well better be.
Now for Ch6, which looks like it'll be a complete rewrite. I'd forgotten just how awful my dialogue was.
(And why did I think it was a good idea to have a pidgeot there to help take Mt. Moon? I want a time machine just so I can smack myself over the head.)
