THAT'S IT, EVERYONE DIES

[farla]

The following review has been submitted to: Butterfly Wings Chapter: 1

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I won't say it's well written. But regardless of what you write or say it's
still a not so original story where an alter ego or yourself gets sucked into
the game.

It gets quite old and annoying if you ask me. I only read the first chapter
and I can already see Kairi bashing. Please if you have something against her
keep it to yourself and do not replace her with your OC.

It's really just the game, but adding in your own character. What's the
honest point? Don't you think if it was best to put your character in, the
creators would have?

Like I said earlier it's well written and there aren't many errors so lucky
you that I don't have to rant about that. But for the plot...I'm sure you
already know my feelings.

Honeslty, is this a story or a "I wish I was in Kingdom Hearts" story?

Fail!

Comments

[wonsab.livejournal.com]

...I'm not sure whether I should laugh or cry.

I'm gonna go with the former for now.

[razorleaf.livejournal.com]

Why, Farla, how dare you come up with your own characters! Shame on you! Tsk, tsk, that is just dreadful.

(Dude, I so want to club this person over the head with a cluestick. They can't actually be that stupid, right?)

[farla.livejournal.com]

Even worse - my character has opinions! CLEARLY THIS MEANS I AGREE WITH EVERY WORD OUT OF HER MOUTH BECAUSE THERE IS NO OTHER POSSIBILITY.