Authors, Part 4

[farla]

You have received a reply from the author, Celebi96, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: End Game
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5869549/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1642100/
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First off, I always capitalize Pokemon names, item names, and move names,
because that's how the games and guides all spell them. I always have.
They're copyrights, and so they ought to be capitalized.

Second of all, I've always abused ellipses, I like to use them to make the
dialogue seem more natural. Maybe it's just because I'm very quiet, but I
think they belong in each place I put them.

As for Jade's gender, Jade could really be a masculine or a feminine name; I
chose it because it fit the gem theme Game Freak has going on for their
characters. After all, Pearl in Pokemon Adventures is a guy, but if I were
going to name someone "Pearl" they would probably be a girl. It depends on
how you think about the words. Also, I guess Brandon thought that that wasn't
actually her real name, kind of just an alias, or something of that nature.
Later you'll find out if this is true.

I'm glad Jade intrigues you. Unfortunately, the next chapter won't reveal
anything more about her that hasn't already been revealed, but this story is
going to be seven chapters long in total. By the end of the story, you may
know a bit more. I promise, there is indeed something special about her
beyond what's been said so far.

Thanks for taking the time to read and critique. I hope you keep reading and
critiquing; critiques are always welcome. Even if I don't outright say that
I'll fix something-or-other, I'm still taking what you say into account. :D

They actually got a pretty good review and this contains some painful point-missing, so I'd say I'm currently getting emails from the normal world.

Title: Pokémon: Tale of Evolution
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5869721/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2018419/
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Thanks for the review! I'm going to address the issues you have mentioned:

I do realize that the fans are familiar with the fanfiction, but the side of
me that's so used to writing original work won't let me get off without
describing a Pokemon before it's name is said. Now, as for your statement of
it being a filler chapter and such. Part of me just wanted to give it the feel
of a nostalgia in my own way, which I guess I failed epically with. To be
honest the introduction is the only chapter that's filler. Everything else has
plot, so I hope you continue to read. I'm trying to make this fanfiction not
as predictable as most.

Now, onto the characters. Normally, I don't accept characters, but every now
and then, I will accept them as just random opponents for the characters to
fight. I already have the main characters in mind. I suppose I should have
clarified that. I do wholly agree about it being hard; I started out that way
back when I was 12. However, I did say "every now and then I will accept
characters." I was hoping they'd get the message that it won't be all the
time.

Name: brezzybrez
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/709553/
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Subject: re: Your review to Dazing

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5869265/

Thank you for your review, but in doing so, you have insulting me and my
writing. if you didn't like then why did you even bother to read or is my
writing such a disgrace to yo. Congrats is making me delete this story off.

Title: The One Who Saved the World from Ash
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5869607/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1818758/
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Dude, first of all, I'm in fifth grade. I don't watch Pokemon, but I decided
to write about it when all the other stories suck. Anyway, if you really don't
like it, READ SOMETHING ELSE!!

Title: Silent Shadows
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5869662/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2159571/
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Thank you for reviewing. Yes, I feel that the story is rushed, too. Actually,
my character is just going off of instinct. I don't think my ideas are getting
through very well...

I will change the story and I'll tell you when I'm done editing.

~Silverstar156
Name: Korin-fox
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2043552/
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Subject: re: Your review to A Pokemon's Journal

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5870126/

You have a valad point about the capitalization. I will most definately keep
it in mind!

Yeaaah, its not my best story yet. I write this journal thing more as a jump
start thing or warm up, so I mostly just throw up on the page and then make it
look pretty. Thats mostly why the wording is awkword. XD

But thank you for the review and corrections! I appriciate it! :3

Name: 12-MM-12
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2006848/
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Subject: re: Your review to Grace of HoOh

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5868111/

Hahaha, thanks for the critic. Much appreciated! (No sarcasm is intended)

So its noun/verb sentence structure, tense wording and capitalizing I need to
watch out for.

Beta reader? You're going to have to help me with that, if you don't mind. Is
it a plug-in I need to download for a writing software on my computer or
something? I use Open Office to write my stuff, but it never points out the
grammar problems, besides capitalization and spelling, like Microsoft word
does.

Anyway thanks for taking some time to read what I had. I'm glad you did a
serious job on critiquing my chapter, truly appreciated.
Name: Emasaur
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1954594/
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Subject: re: Your review to Meaningless

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5870987/

Aw... I kinda did do that, didn't I. Dx
Thank you for pointing that out, because I assure it wasn't my intention.
Maybe it was some subconscious thing that wanted you to understand that... it
was white. XDD

Anyways, thank you for the critic and review~

You have received a private message from:

Name: qwerty12345
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1389451/
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Subject: Just a quick note...

I wanted to thank you. I did not see your revised review until just now and I
feel that it is going to help me improve my writing tenfold.

Simply put, thanks.
This final one appears to be for last year's NaRe.