farla

Name: Stars-and-Fire
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2250656/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Region of Leyenda

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5877449/

Thanks for your advice. Now I hope you don't mind, but I'd just like to say
something.

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When you give someone a harsh review, it will often bring down the person. I'm
not saying not to point out the bad points, but point out the good ones too (:

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Name: RedPaperWhite
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2314526/
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Subject: re: Your review to What the bleedin' 'ell is a Pokermon?

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5877333/

Likewise, I could say that a review isn't supposed to be consisted of blatant
insults, with no appraisal or constructive criticism. I joined this website to
become a better writer - I had zero prior experience, so I thought it would be
a good thing for me to have a hobby which I can readily improve on with help
from people with the same interests.

My goal in this story was to contrast the characters of a franchise we all
know and love, with a brutal exaggeration of British chav-culture. Now,
considering that you probably don't even know what a 'chav' is, an insulting
review like yours is about as useful as someone who's been living under a rock
for the last twenty years telling me that the creatures in my story are
'unrealistic'.
But y'know, if when you wrote your review you were trying to make me give up
on being creative and embarrass me to the point where I wish I'd never even
attempted to write, then you've done your job.

Have a nice day.

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Story: You
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: The King of Emerald ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/799077/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=101985355
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I admit, this story is actually somewhat interesting. Having the character of
the original game being completely confused as to who he is or where he is
from or even where he is right now. Although in honesty I kinda find it
funny. Not too much, though.

I originally read this story because I wanted to know how good the skill was
for someone who bashed Blackrose's story a bit. Sorry, I mean constructive
criticism. It's nothing personal, but lately my friend and I have been
dealing with insensitive jackasses who flame a story and haven't even written
one of their own. It's ridiculous. Not you, though. You actually do know
what the hell you're talking about. And you're good at it too. I'm not
trying to insult you, just saying... or typing, in this case.

But you went a little overboard on Sea Blue. Blackrose only started typing
because of me, and he hasn't been doing this nearly as long. You should have
seen him when he first started out.

I know that if you read mine, you'll most likely hate it as well, but I still
ask you find mine. But if you comment once about the title, then I will
immediately ignore anything that you have to say. People can put whatever
they want in the title. For example, this story title says You. I may not
like it, but it is yours, so I'm not going to convince you to change it.
Personally, I think it is a little bland, and it doesn't really seem to
coincide with anything in this chapter.

Anyway, I like this story so far, and if you do decide to continue it, let me
know. I'm not going to put it on Alert now, though, because I'm sick of
putting things on Story Alert or Author Alert and never getting an update from
them.
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Title: The Rules
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5877490/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1864336/
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First of all, thank-you for the grammar tips.
Second of all, I think you missed the point of the story. It wasn't supposed
to be an epic story with a fantastically deep and profound meaning, it was
supposed to be like a long drabble. It was meant to make fun of Pokemon, and
hopefully be a bit funny, but clearly that failed.Â
Finally, don't worry. I won't bother the Â pokemon archives with my 'stupid'
stories. Â

Respectfully yours,

Chelra

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