Date: 2011-01-03 05:14 am (UTC)
Darkrai politely disappeared as the boy got dressed, though still watching secretly. Lucas's body appealed to him. Summer was worth living through because despite the long days, Lucas would often throw aside his shirt in the midst of training due to the heat.

What.

Darkrai found himself a bit awestruck as well. Never before had Lucas spoken so coldly, so matter-of-fact. It reminded him strongly of his own manner of speaking, how he had spoken to the girl in her dreams.

What.

Dawn-bashing is fun.

WHAT.

It's like she's working out of Jerry Jenkins's Guide to Writing Likable Protagonists.
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