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[farla]

So...

Chapter Two of Unoriginality: AAMLudicrousness is up.

Let's see how many people figure out the last line, shall we?

Comments

[kddreams.livejournal.com]

Does Sue refer marysues? Because that's what I'm thinking. Always good to have happily ever afters. I definitely want all my children to be exactly like me... yep... sure...

[wintersheir]

xD Cute.

[razorleaf.livejournal.com]

I think it will be hard for the kiddies to grasp that - seeing as he's been away for a year - Ash cannot be the father of that Sue.
Loved the chapter, very good. Poor May always gets bashed...

[(Anonymous)]

Advice/Review needed:

I have an old story I wrote a while ago. I'm wondering whether it's a lost cause that I should simply throw out, or whether it's remotely fixable. (I promise that I'll either *actually* follow your suggestions or simply delete the story if I can't find a way to make it better.)

-Link- (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2028003/1/)


Be warned. We have an angsty Team Rocket Main Sue Character with a very stereotypical Pokemon.


I am not fragile. Go ahead and be merciless as usual. (Not that you needed prompting anyway.)

[ladyumbra.livejournal.com]

*snickers* Sulfurous smoke eh? That borders on copying Nightcrawler's brimstone smell when he teleports. That was highly amusing, Sue is obviously not Ash's unless of course we're talking invitro.