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Name: Hammohamster
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1706728/

Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon Trainer Jeff

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6648948/

Listen cunt, when I want your Opion, i'll ask for it eat a dick and fuck off

Name: Hollow Mashiro
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1746696/

Subject: re: Your review to Shadowfall

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6642358/

Thank you very much for taking the time to send me a review. Would you mind
listening to the points I bring up in response to your constructive

In response to your thoughts about the proper capitalization of Pokemon (yes,
I capitalize it) and all of the species the word encompasses, I would like to
point out that I am using partial video game logic when it comes to
capitalization, since that's what I grew up with (instead of watching the
anime). If I went strictly with video game capitalization, then I'd use
neither pikachu nor Pikachu, instead using PIKACHU, since the names of all
Pokemon and Pokemon-related things are in all caps. I've compromised for
writing fanfiction, since it would be rather awkward to type and read POKEMON,
TEDDIURSA, EEVEE, TRAINER, etc. all the time, don't you think? Instead, I use
Pokemon, Teddiursa, Eevee, and Trainer. While it may seem odd that I'd stick
with this decision, please remember that I'm using a video game as a starting
point for my fic, instead of the anime.

As for my writing style, I tend to expand a lot upon imagery, especially in
scenes from video games or anime that I convert from movie format to word
format. As for my awkward wording, except for the first paragraph, I'm writing
what the sailors see, except for when the helicopter pilot's device glows.
Even then, I state, "unnoticed by the sailors". The sailors don't see the beam
grabbing the ship, which is the action; they simply see a beam of energy
connecting the ship to the beast, which is the image.

I hope this clears things up for you. Thanks again for your criticism.


Name: PokemonFanSince96
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2532357/

Subject: re: Your review to Pokeholiday

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6621177/

thanks about that somehow I keep on forgetting things like that... I always
forget the little things.

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