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You have received a reply from the author, The Finesseful X, regarding the
review you posted for:

Title: Perception
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6657073/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2653608/

Finally, I've gotten a review from you! I've been waiting for one of your
scathing reviews. ;) My writing style is my writing style, and as far as I'm
aware, feelingshipping ain't generic.

Thanks for copying and pasting your little corrections onto a review for me.
Makes me feel SO loved. ;)

ANYways, there's no particular way to do thoughts. Different writers use
different ways. And if my writing doesn't conform to your ideas on how to
write thoughts, then that's too bad. ALSO, I've read many reviews of yours
that condemn people for using 'said' too much. Personally, I don't like using
'said'. That's just me.

One thing I will say is thanks for reviewing, and I mean it too. I didn't have
any reviews on that story yet. And believe it or not, I HAVE been waiting for
you to review me. I figured 'it's only a matter of time.' So, sincerely,
thanks. I also must say, I respect your seniority as a writer. Many, many of
the older pokemon stories on the site are yours. So, kudos for that. I've
noticed that our writing styles differ, I have read a bit of your work.
Personally, I feel that even when it was creative, it was wooden. A bit empty.
But whatever. Everyone has things they can work on, and I'm sure you'd agree
that neither of us are an exception to that.

I may have been a bit sarcastic at the beginning of this reply, but I do
appreciate your review. So, thanks a lot *sarcastic*, and thank you,



(A little extra finesse for you. ^_~)

You have received a reply from the author, mommafro, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: Old Folks
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6656765/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1205484/

Can you at least explain why so I can somehow improve my writing

Name: HeartGold12
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2416644/

Subject: Och...

I'm deeply sorry my story wasn't nice... I'm just a beginner tough. Maybe i
should just delete it and start something other... Thank you for comment.

Name: Frost3332
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2645803/

Subject: Thank You

I just wanted to thank you for reviewing my story, and being completly honest.
Whenever I ask any of my friends to look something over they just say its good
and I should keep going, no one ever wants to point out all my mistakes.
Without anyone to show me my errors, I was begining to belive there were none.
I had forgotten many of the grammar rules, or overlooked simply mistakes that
I should have caught. I was growing rather lazy on charactorization and I had
forgotten the importance of proofreading. I will try and keep some of the
things you mentioned in mind later, and use them to become a better writer.
Thank you again!



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