x_x That was painful. The lecturing got a bit redundant after a while. There wasn't much humour either, unless someone finds canon characters talking about cheese funny... You were also lacking cybersperm, AKA ~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~ Ugh, script style, the bane of fanfiction. Do people just use the script format because they're lazy or is because they actually think that it would add to the humour somehow? It's even worse when people use script style for normal fics. I remember Articuno and his terrible terrible stories and how he used to delete them and upload them over and over again to get rid of the flames and attempt to get positive reviews. (insert cyber sperm) In my opinion, this might make a better essay. The parody portion seems a bit forced and went off topic too much.
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Date: 2004-07-13 06:34 am (UTC)The lecturing got a bit redundant after a while. There wasn't much humour either, unless someone finds canon characters talking about cheese funny...
You were also lacking cybersperm, AKA
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Ugh, script style, the bane of fanfiction. Do people just use the script format because they're lazy or is because they actually think that it would add to the humour somehow? It's even worse when people use script style for normal fics. I remember Articuno and his terrible terrible stories and how he used to delete them and upload them over and over again to get rid of the flames and attempt to get positive reviews.
(insert cyber sperm)
In my opinion, this might make a better essay. The parody portion seems a bit forced and went off topic too much.