Pokemon Revolution Ch8
Oct. 28th, 2006 07:39 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
farlaChapter Eight of Pokemon Revolution is up.
It was largely conversation, so this chapter was pretty much completely rewritten. I left about four lines completely intact, removed large chunks of pure stupidity, and rewrote about half the scenes from scratch.
It was largely conversation, so this chapter was pretty much completely rewritten. I left about four lines completely intact, removed large chunks of pure stupidity, and rewrote about half the scenes from scratch.
