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farlaChapter 10 of Pokemon Revolution is up.
So it's completely rewritten, with only the opening and ending scenes having any resemblence to the original. Which means when people tell me it's badly written and stupid, it'll actually be my fault this time... I'm also really reworking some of the characters. Probably Wildfire the most. She's kind of going in this direction near the end of the story, but even then it's not to such a strong degree. Well, I didn't really like her much. Also probably, I'm going to recomplicate things again just like I did last time, but in a different way. Maybe worse.
You know, it would really suck to try to carry on a conversation with any of my characters. Hopefully I'll succeed in getting across how annoying some of them are without annoying readers at the same time.
So it's completely rewritten, with only the opening and ending scenes having any resemblence to the original. Which means when people tell me it's badly written and stupid, it'll actually be my fault this time... I'm also really reworking some of the characters. Probably Wildfire the most. She's kind of going in this direction near the end of the story, but even then it's not to such a strong degree. Well, I didn't really like her much. Also probably, I'm going to recomplicate things again just like I did last time, but in a different way. Maybe worse.
You know, it would really suck to try to carry on a conversation with any of my characters. Hopefully I'll succeed in getting across how annoying some of them are without annoying readers at the same time.
