Yeah, I fixed the name bit (chapter thirteen's final edit was a bit rushed because I realized I hadn't done it that night, and I wanted to get it up on time.)
I liked your dissection of the assumptions that people make about keeping pokemon, though--it's been bothering me as well, an itch-on-my-brain that I couldn't quite find the edge of.
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Date: 2007-06-17 10:45 pm (UTC)Yeah, I fixed the name bit (chapter thirteen's final edit was a bit rushed because I realized I hadn't done it that night, and I wanted to get it up on time.)
I liked your dissection of the assumptions that people make about keeping pokemon, though--it's been bothering me as well, an itch-on-my-brain that I couldn't quite find the edge of.
Thanks, I'm glad you found it interesting!