Pokemon Revolution Ch14

[farla]

Chapter Fourteen of Pokemon Revolution is now up. As can be seen in my opening notes, the moral here is that my main motivation in writing is an opportunity to screw with people.

I don't much like the chapter itself, but then, the format of the original chapter was actually rewritten dozens of times in the first place, so it's no surprise I'd run into similar problems on update. But then, seeing that the reviews so far have been divided between "I hate the pokemon and I hate you and I hate Eon most of all because she's pure evil" and "Awesome! I can't wait for Eon to kill Ash and his friends!" I imagine this will be a sentiment shared by readers regardless.

On an unrelated note: I am incredibly pleased to discover that fandom has already made Teddy Lupin gay.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I somehow have this feeling that people will simply ignore all that bolded text since it's in the AN section, if you really wanted to annoy people you should have put pieces of spoilers in random sections of the chapter, if there are readers who don't know the story is being reposted chances are it's because they avoid all the author's notes.

[farla.livejournal.com]

Bold attracts people's eyes, if only for an instant; putting notes throughout the chapter would have ruined the chapter; paradoxically, people seem dimly aware it's a repost while still clinging to the idea it was written recently and subject to complete storyline change at their whim.

[(Anonymous)]

Are you talking about Warlorn? He seems like such a coward, reviewing anonymously and leaving out his e-mail like that...

[farla.livejournal.com]

Oh, Warlorn-chan is in a separate class of insane all by himself. I do know his email, but it's completely pointless - I've emailed him multiple times to say I'd be happy to fix OOC parts as much as I can if he points out a specific bit bothering him rather than just telling me something, somewhere, is OOC in his opinion and how dare I not fix it. I just get back tl;dr rambles about how Ash should have joined Eon with his friends because of his pure true love for Pikachu, then realized Eon is Teh Ebil and the devil and shit, and left for Hoenn to go be noble and shining and perfect over there because he's too good to be part of this.

He's been reviewing anonymously for a year or two because he thinks I blocked him, which was lucky since it allowed me to delete his Ch2 review discussing the events of Ch35+ in great detail. Since then he's actually been blocked in case he does something like that again.