A new low...

I reviewed a new story a few hours ago, Aranel by Vulpix4Life. It's moronic - among other things, the idiot of a writer's giving the rapidash elfish names. (No, seriously: Lessien frowned at those names but suddenly thought of an old elfish name, Aranel. I couldn't imagine stuff this stupid.) And now I look at the reviews and see pokewrighter has made a comment.

don't listen to farla, she thinks too much. Over gramerizing a story like that can make it boring. Maybee someone should tell her that ponyta and rapidash arn't horses, so they might act differantly. altough I have a feeling that you could have combined the this chapter with the one your working on.

Yes. Over gramerizing.

More morons. Yay...

Hello again everyone.

Some of you may have noticed the story up now, The White Umbreon by Silver-chan284. I reviewed it, like the other story I mentioned earlier, a few hours ago. I just checked and I see there's another chapter.

A little background:

The story is about a trainer who gets turned into an umbreon by having umbreon blood injected into him. No, it's a lot worse than it sounds. I went into it expecting it wouldn't be the best, but I didn't think it'd be half as awful as it was.

I review the story. My review is: ( cut here for length issues )

So now. What's the chapter?

( This )

Normally I'd be heading towards the 'report abuse' button about now, but I actually feel like leaving this up for people to see.