A new low...
Jan. 23rd, 2005 01:46 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
farlaI reviewed a new story a few hours ago, Aranel by Vulpix4Life. It's moronic - among other things, the idiot of a writer's giving the rapidash elfish names. (No, seriously: Lessien frowned at those names but suddenly thought of an old elfish name, Aranel. I couldn't imagine stuff this stupid.) And now I look at the reviews and see pokewrighter has made a comment.
don't listen to farla, she thinks too much. Over gramerizing a story like that can make it boring. Maybee someone should tell her that ponyta and rapidash arn't horses, so they might act differantly. altough I have a feeling that you could have combined the this chapter with the one your working on.
Yes. Over gramerizing.
don't listen to farla, she thinks too much. Over gramerizing a story like that can make it boring. Maybee someone should tell her that ponyta and rapidash arn't horses, so they might act differantly. altough I have a feeling that you could have combined the this chapter with the one your working on.
Yes. Over gramerizing.
