Chapter Ten, Name, of Ice is up. It's extremely short, but I'm pleased with my explanation. (In the original I never had to explain her name, so it was actually pretty hard.)
I was debating if there should be another chapter before this. It made sense, but I didn't really have any ideas for what actually happened between Ch9 and what's now Ch10. This sort of thing is the main problem with Ice - I have all sorts of random bits and ideas, but it's assembling them into something resembling chronological order that's the issue.
I was debating if there should be another chapter before this. It made sense, but I didn't really have any ideas for what actually happened between Ch9 and what's now Ch10. This sort of thing is the main problem with Ice - I have all sorts of random bits and ideas, but it's assembling them into something resembling chronological order that's the issue.