Ice Ch10

[farla]

Chapter Ten, Name, of Ice is up. It's extremely short, but I'm pleased with my explanation. (In the original I never had to explain her name, so it was actually pretty hard.)

I was debating if there should be another chapter before this. It made sense, but I didn't really have any ideas for what actually happened between Ch9 and what's now Ch10. This sort of thing is the main problem with Ice - I have all sorts of random bits and ideas, but it's assembling them into something resembling chronological order that's the issue.

Comments

[logophilia.livejournal.com]

Out of curiosity, do you have the older version of Pokemon Revolution saved somewhere if someone would like to read it?

It's really funny - this is probably the lamest thing you've ever heard - but when I read your story Espeon it was one of the defining moments for me as an author. For someone who had never really understood the darker realizations of humanity it was an eyeopener. Just the stuff you referenced in it and stuff. So, thanks? Hahaha, that probably sounds creepy.

[farla.livejournal.com]

I have all the original chapters of Pokemon Revolution on my computer. A version can be found at Charles Rocketboy's website that's pretty similar but has some rewriting.

And thanks, I'm glad it had an effect.