Authors, Part 6

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Name: Corkk the Forgetful Scribe
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/996507/
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Subject: re: Your review to At the Speed Of Light

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5875278/

i do appreciate your corrections, but at the same time, you gottaslow down
with it, i have a hard time understanding what you want me to fix, i do
realize that my grammer has kinda declined throughout the story, but i do like
to think that its still massively better than most peoples' on this site.

i will however take your advice and go back and fix the chapters.

i would have liked to know what you thought about the content of the chapters
too....not just the grammer, its not like the grammer makes it unreadable.

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Name: Poofle
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1755276/
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Subject: re: Your review to Rebirth

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5873604/

Though I agree with your Pokemon capitalizing thing, I'm still going to
continue to capitalize both the word Pokemon and their names. It just looks
right. /shrug/

When did I switch between past and present? /just wants to know/

The reason they're friends will be explained.

Any grammar mistakes that have to do with the dialogue and possessive stuff
(like its and it's) were done by mistake - I know the difference. But I didn't
know this: Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound
you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the
second category.

So thanks for the info, I'll be sure to watch out for that.

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Name: Sweet but Psycho
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2173238/
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Subject: re: Your review to Mesprit's Horrific Myth

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5872064/

Wow, first thanks for a real review. what I got for another story was 'good.'
Thanks, but why?
I know you said I shouldn't capitalize words like pikachu, but with pokemon
it is the name of the show, which is a title, and so should be capitilized. I
realized in this sense I am not using it as a title for a show, I'm using it
as a general term like animal, but I've tried so many times over to fix that
stupid auto correct thing on my computer, but it just keeps it up. And I
figured that since itwasn't a spelling mistake it wouldn't bother people as
much. As for the capitilizing regular pokemon, sorry. I'll fix that.

As for the half-dead/but I'm chatting bit, well, I really should have edited
for content, your right. I was focusing on spelling mistakes. What I meant
was, in the past, she was communicating, but now she was letting herself slip.
But I did not make that at ll clear, did I?
Negative connotation/happy with affairs: Their happy in general just to be
able to be dormant, and don't want that disturbed. Once again, thanks for
telling me how crappily I laid that out.

I think I'll just completly re-write this story with your suggestions. It
was just a bit of fluff in my head, and I really wrote it far too fast, and
neglected proper editing. Once again,thanks for the real review.

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Name: Zakman
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1238718/
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Subject: re: Your review to Kalpa Pokemon: Odyssey of Fate

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5869573/

I respect your review, though harsh it maybe. Aside from my "awkward writing"
which was actually meant to be descriptive, I will fix the speaker
paragraphing and fix the first page accordingly to the speaker specifications
of the paragraph ruling.

I hope that you and many more will enjoy the story I am about to convey and
wish you peace on your path ^.^

Name: werebunny131
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1701036/
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Subject: re: Your review to Recovery

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5875230/

Truth be told, that has ALWAYS confused me. When to capitalize and comma vs
period with speech. Thank you for putting it straight. Also, dialogue is what
I write as opposed to description. The descriptions never come out like I
picture (dialogue is my strong suit and yet I don't even know how to do it
right, I know, weird). It's my first fanfiction. Thank you for the review!

And a bonus review:
Story: Butterfly Wings
Chapter: 1. The Second Day
From: EmoxJerk ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1195581/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=101897642
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Yes your grammar and English is all correct, but your story lacks creativity I
suppose that's how you'd say it. The first chapter was excessive canon
character bashing. It's not against the law or anything to hate a canon
character, but inserting yourself, wait sorry, an "OC" into the story and just
insulting the crap out of a canon character is just obnoxious and it's pretty
Sue-ish. I did read the very recent chapter and once again I must make the
comment that it did not grab my interests at all. I felt like I was reading a
scientific textbook. Hell, a scientific textbook would be considered a piece
of literature compared to your story.

Like someone else has mentioned earlier, the only thing you got going for you
is your knowledge of the English language. Whoop dee flippin' doo. Honey,
Microsoft Word takes care of the basic grammar a writer needs, but it doesn't
provide the imagination and creativity. Hopefully you'll be able to grasp that
concept one day.
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