Authors, Part 7

[farla]

Title: Gilded Frontier
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5872820/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1988758/
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I want to thank you. This actually one of the few pieces of constructive
criticism that I've gotten. Heck, I could count the constructive reviews I've
seen on this entire site on one hand.

I concede that in your review, you're right. Most of what you pointed out I
attribute to "It sounded good in my head" syndrome, so thanks for pointing out
areas where readers may/will get confused.

Thanks again,
flaretempest

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Name: Librarian00X
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2233017/
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tact·ful

tact·ful [táktfəl]
adj
characterized by tact: having or showing concern about upsetting or offending people



-tact·ful·ly, , adv
-tact·ful·ness, , n

diplomatic, discreet, sensitive, delicate, thoughtful, considerate, perceptive, insightful, discerning, skillful, dexterous, subtle, judicious, careful, polite, kind
antonym: tactless

I like critical people. I don't like people who are rude about it. Get some tact before you review next time, would you kindly?

Title: Secret of NIMH 3
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5867419/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2147897/
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I'm bad at spelling and grammar. I'm only in 7th grade.

Name: adventurestylist
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2248971/
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Subject: hi

Hey instead of just pointing out my errors would you mind giving me sujestions
on how to fix it? That way I can keep it in mind for the next chapter.

Name: werebunny131
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1701036/
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Subject: re: Your review to Her

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5876311/

In the Mystery Dungeon games, all of the Pokemon are named what they are. The
Pokemon names are capitalized because it's their proper names. I also
capitalize Pokemon, because...well, I think it looks better that way. Grammar
aside, what did you think of the story itself?

Name: irishpepsigurl
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2195003/
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Subject: re: Your review to Houndoom and the Kid

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5876384/

If Lily is such a sue, (no offense meant here) do you have any suggestions on
how to make her seem more realistic and not as perfect? Plus, Charizard,
Raichu, Luxray, Suicune, etc., etc., are the names of the pokemon, so I'd
imagine they would be capitalized. Again, no offense meant, I'm just curious
and your review is still appreciated, because if I can improve my character,
that would be nice.

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Considering if I should start another thread for people who want to ask questions, since god knows I don't have time for PMs.