Authors, Part 10

[farla]

Where the fuck is this drabble nonsense coming from?

Title: Zoroark Awakens
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5882997/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1534928/
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Actually, you should always capitalize words like Pokémon and Pokémon names.
Species names, such as Tyrannosaurus rex, are capitalized. Attack names are
likewise capitalized, as they are names. Look at Bulbapedia sometime. Or
Serebii. Or even the god-forsaken place known as Wikipedia. Not only are they
capitalized as species names, they are trademarked as "Pokémon",
"Mew",
"Pikachu", and "Charizard", not "pokemon", "mew",
"pikachu", and "charizard".
Also, Zoroark being cloned from both Mew and Mewtwo is not redundant. There
are many differences between the two.
If I make an apostrophe error, it is an honest error. I know the rules of
apostrophes. It annoys me when people misuse them.
Adverbs are even worse. "Real quick" should be "really quickly" in
most
usages. "I'm feeling good" is also wrong, as it should be "I'm feeling
well".
When you change the subject, you should create a new paragraph, as well as
when a second person speaks. "Hi." "Hi." is incorrect.
The apostrophe has been fixed.

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Name: Indigo-Freezii
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2317223/
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Subject: re: Your review to Indigo: Eye's of Change

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5881505/

I capitalize those words because that's just how I write. It's my style, and
everyone has their own style, and additionally, in this story, I'm treating
the species' names more as titles (eg. Indigo the Bayleef). I explain things
like that to add depth to the story. Would you tell Lois Lowry she was wrong
because she wrote a (magnificent) story solely about a girl finding blue
pigment? And finally, the first chapter is the preface to the actual story,
but I will change the name so it says preface.

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Looks like people are going to continue to regurgitate their latest English class in response to criticism. This is a new and depressing turn.


Name: R H M M R H
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1943960/
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Subject: re: Your review to Dreams

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5883083/

What's that supposed to mean exactly?

Title: Yugioh, I choose you
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5882682/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2317287/
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Thanks for pointing out that the capitalizing bits for me :3 and What i mean
by the blue eyes is; it's a lot larger than a pokemon, it would be terrifing
to just see it in real life, let alone see it attack. and i am going to edit
this in time but i want aleast two more reviews. Also not to be rude but i've
only just started writing (like it says at the top of the page)so there is no
need to say i'm terrible.

Thanks anyway.

Sorry if anything is spelt wrong or this makes no sence at all its
like...stupid o'clock in morning.

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Name: Hunter Stag
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1371834/
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Subject: re: Your review to A New Beginning

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5883891/

Thanks for the criticism. I try to make this as close to the anime-style of
working as possible, and I just wanted to work in a battle other than the one
at the end. And about your chapter 1 problems; that's the way I write. Lots of
dialogue in between action scenes. Stories are normally built around dialogue,
not during a fight. And my computer puts lines a space and a half apart, so if
the gaps seem to big, blame my computer.

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