Authors, Part Seven
Jan. 8th, 2011 05:21 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
farlaName: Arzeus
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2014348/
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Subject: re: Your review to Fate
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6633043/
meh, i relly don't look that deep into it. I see you look into ever nook and
cranny for spelling and grammer only, and don't really look at the plot. you
arn't really looking at the story it's self. your looking at grammer and
spelling, but not detail and plot really. plus, i gurentee i'm younger than
you think for writing a story like this. But i am old enough to be on this
site. but anyway, i value your imput and all, but your not really giving me
positive feedback, and your feed back is just to plain hard to follow. anyway,
still thanks for the review
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Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: Johan07 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1655817/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=118525946
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Dude!
I have seen u often criticize other author's work. What r u? The grammar
fairy?
Just because u have a slight...A SLIGHT better grammar than the rest of us,
doesnt mean u have to go around and give those who don't have strong grammar
like YOU a hard time. By doing that, you're just being a ************
Oh, by the way, stop posting the same DAMN COMMENT about how to use phrases or
sentences correctly. We aren't ***** pre-schoolers. We know how they work. We
don't need a smart ass like YOU to remind us. You're just making people want
to kick ur ass.
If you're not interested in reading our stories, then DON'T ***** read them
then =( You're just being a pain in the ass. Instead of worrying about others,
just worry about yourself. No one wants to hear from a know-it-all like you n
some others out there. So if I were YOU, I would better off NOT posting any
more reviews or else people will stop readin ur stories because of ur negative
comments about his/her grammar. This is just a fair warning n don't even try
to reply to this or send me a PM message. Or even try to post a comment on one
of my stories. Sorry, but I block you. Too bad. You lost my respect when u
became a pain in the ass or annoying know-it-all.
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Name: Nauran
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1915784/
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Subject: re: Your review to Ash's Precious Little Girl II
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6632435/
I was wondering if/when you would review this girl's work.
Yes, it is painful to read, and yes, I submit to your 'almighty' reviewer-ship
(for lack of a better word) or criticism, which spreads like wildfire in the
minds of the reviewed.
Too bad we can't put people like Johan07 into a better light.
--------------------
Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: Super asian 265 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2462184/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=118530496
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Stop posting the same review all the time you are so freaking annoying! You
dont make sence.
"Um.. oh yeah you never say "Hi." Your suppose to say, "Hi"
Nice going sherlock u solved that case well.
Read what you are going to write because you end up sounding like a kid that
has ADHD.
YOu always brag "OH i have better grammar than all of you!" So no one wants
to hear it.
Give people for praise once for once in a while. I've always learned this.
"if you cant say anything nice don't say anything."
IN this case, you better follow it.
I'm not being mean, this is what i think and what multiple authors think.
Your reviews put everyonne down, and discourages them for writing.
dont review my stories if your not going to expect much from it!
Considering you came here from 01 i'd think you'd know.
I actually see no talent in your writing, judging this from other reviewers.
Yeah i see no one is on your author list, that explains EVERYTHING.
I suggest you screw off and dont review. I'm speaking for everyone here.
Yah! Thats what i had to say! ALL of it.
P.s. YOUR BLOCKED GET A LOAD OF THAT! tHAT WAY PEOPLE LIKE YOU CANT REVIEW MY
STORIES. I'll be warning people about you and your harsh criticism!
Take others feeling in consideration.
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Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: YOU FAIL AT LIFE DOUCHEBAG ()
-------------------
Ok, I have over a billion complaints for you, you fucking jackass. I've seen
your reviews to other fics and they're getting downright annoying. You keep
repeating the same fucking things OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN! We don't
fucking care anymore! By repeating things, you are totally getting rid of the
purpose of a review. Any random idiot can copy and paste stuff together, but
reviews are supposed to come from the heart.
You've always been correcting us in grammar, and I respect that, BUT YOU'RE
FUCKING ANNOYING. GO DIR IN A HOLE ALREADY YOU BASTARD! We are not
preschoolers that don't know the difference between there and their. WE KNOW
THINGS, IDIOT. You don't need to shove into our faces that you have better
grammar. This just shows the kind of conceited bastard you are.
Anyway, after telling you all about your reviewing faults, it's about time I
tell you this story's faults.
1. It lacks emotion. So what if you have the best grammar in the world! All of
that crap doesn't matter if you cant connect with your audience. Stories
aren't meant to show people how good you are at writing, it's used to convey
the feelings of the characters. EVERYTHING LACKED EMOTION. Emotion is the most
basic and important thing you need in a fic.
2. You're always complaining that we are so unoriginal. Well wake up dude!
Your first scene is a guy waking up. HOW FUCKING CLICHE IS THAT? If you're
complaining to us about unoriginality, go fix your problems first.
3. Your writing is TOO poetic. You lost my interest within the first sentence.
It took too long for a single thing to happen and your story really didnt get
anywhere.
SO IF YOU'RE GOING TO COMPLAIN ABOUT OUR WRITING, FIX YOUR FUCKING WORK TOO!
GO DIE IN A HOLE YOU DOUCHEBAG! And if you're offended by this review, GOOD!
This is exactly how everyone else feels! You fucking bastard.
-------------------
You have received a reply from the author, LiliNeko, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: Like It's Her Birthday
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6632240/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/998624/
--------------------
Farla,
Thank you so much for your honest and helpful review **hugs** And I do
apologize for posting one of my worst ego-fic that I've written/posted. I
kinda knew I had really rushed it, probably mainly because I lost interest in
it 3/4 of the way due to lack of time to work on it. But also I have a habit
of wanting things to be 'done' and 'over with' because I can't having
something laying around "unfinished".
I was having seconds thoughts of posting this or not and I guess I didn't go
with the better judgment ;p But thanks to your review it definitely set my
mind straight. Gonna take it down and re-vamp it later down the road when I
get the chance and also my beta-friend.
Also thank you so much for the grammar/sentences break down, I will be saving
this review and try my best taking notes from you. I always have a tough time
on my grammars because I keep on mixing it up with my nationality grammar ^^;
But reviews like these always pushes me for more improvements compared to the
last one. Thanks again, take care and ta-ta for now **hugs**
Lili
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Name: Charityx
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2675814/
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Subject: Kiss 'n' Tell
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6632713/
Thanks, I didn't actually have time to read through it once I was done so I
might have repeated some words by mistake.
Really? I didn't know that they were banned seeing as I've read loads of
songfics on here, so... and, if you hate them so much, then why bother reading
mine, just out of curiosity?
--------------------
Name: FlarePheonix1093
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1946212/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon GodTrainer
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6632480/
hey leave him alone the story is good!
--------------------
Name: Dryuu
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1064687/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Trapped in Another World: May
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6630785/
Stop making stupid advice that people don't need. PERIOD.
--------------------
Story: Butterfly Wings
Chapter: 1. The Second Day
From: sunshinedasies ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2648102/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=118567689
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I couldn't even finish the first chapter it was so bad- and I've read I'm
immortal and imma wisard- atleast there funny. your dull, unimaginative and
don't have an ounce of creativity in your body at all. what's worse is that
you flame other peoples work about absolutly tiny gramatical mistakes. at
least they are actually imaginative about there storys! and what's worse is
that you flame different peoples storys with the same review! and you wish
them to die! even if I hate a fic I would never wish bad things on that
person.
and before you ask your the first person I've ever written a review like this
for
-------------------
Did actually reply to this one to tell them the fic is "My Immortal". I'm not even entirely sure that's what they meant, but why not?
Story: Butterfly Wings
Chapter: 2. Departure
From: sunshinedasies ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2648102/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=118568703
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oh and I forgot to mention mewmewradish is my best friend and if you ever
send her a review like that again or tell her to go die in a fire or to anyone
else for that matter I won't hesitate to report you! your cruel and heartless
-------------------
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2014348/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Fate
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6633043/
meh, i relly don't look that deep into it. I see you look into ever nook and
cranny for spelling and grammer only, and don't really look at the plot. you
arn't really looking at the story it's self. your looking at grammer and
spelling, but not detail and plot really. plus, i gurentee i'm younger than
you think for writing a story like this. But i am old enough to be on this
site. but anyway, i value your imput and all, but your not really giving me
positive feedback, and your feed back is just to plain hard to follow. anyway,
still thanks for the review
--------------------
Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: Johan07 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1655817/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=118525946
-------------------
Dude!
I have seen u often criticize other author's work. What r u? The grammar
fairy?
Just because u have a slight...A SLIGHT better grammar than the rest of us,
doesnt mean u have to go around and give those who don't have strong grammar
like YOU a hard time. By doing that, you're just being a ************
Oh, by the way, stop posting the same DAMN COMMENT about how to use phrases or
sentences correctly. We aren't ***** pre-schoolers. We know how they work. We
don't need a smart ass like YOU to remind us. You're just making people want
to kick ur ass.
If you're not interested in reading our stories, then DON'T ***** read them
then =( You're just being a pain in the ass. Instead of worrying about others,
just worry about yourself. No one wants to hear from a know-it-all like you n
some others out there. So if I were YOU, I would better off NOT posting any
more reviews or else people will stop readin ur stories because of ur negative
comments about his/her grammar. This is just a fair warning n don't even try
to reply to this or send me a PM message. Or even try to post a comment on one
of my stories. Sorry, but I block you. Too bad. You lost my respect when u
became a pain in the ass or annoying know-it-all.
-------------------
Name: Nauran
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1915784/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Ash's Precious Little Girl II
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6632435/
I was wondering if/when you would review this girl's work.
Yes, it is painful to read, and yes, I submit to your 'almighty' reviewer-ship
(for lack of a better word) or criticism, which spreads like wildfire in the
minds of the reviewed.
Too bad we can't put people like Johan07 into a better light.
--------------------
Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: Super asian 265 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2462184/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=118530496
-------------------
Stop posting the same review all the time you are so freaking annoying! You
dont make sence.
"Um.. oh yeah you never say "Hi." Your suppose to say, "Hi"
Nice going sherlock u solved that case well.
Read what you are going to write because you end up sounding like a kid that
has ADHD.
YOu always brag "OH i have better grammar than all of you!" So no one wants
to hear it.
Give people for praise once for once in a while. I've always learned this.
"if you cant say anything nice don't say anything."
IN this case, you better follow it.
I'm not being mean, this is what i think and what multiple authors think.
Your reviews put everyonne down, and discourages them for writing.
dont review my stories if your not going to expect much from it!
Considering you came here from 01 i'd think you'd know.
I actually see no talent in your writing, judging this from other reviewers.
Yeah i see no one is on your author list, that explains EVERYTHING.
I suggest you screw off and dont review. I'm speaking for everyone here.
Yah! Thats what i had to say! ALL of it.
P.s. YOUR BLOCKED GET A LOAD OF THAT! tHAT WAY PEOPLE LIKE YOU CANT REVIEW MY
STORIES. I'll be warning people about you and your harsh criticism!
Take others feeling in consideration.
-------------------
Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: YOU FAIL AT LIFE DOUCHEBAG ()
-------------------
Ok, I have over a billion complaints for you, you fucking jackass. I've seen
your reviews to other fics and they're getting downright annoying. You keep
repeating the same fucking things OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN! We don't
fucking care anymore! By repeating things, you are totally getting rid of the
purpose of a review. Any random idiot can copy and paste stuff together, but
reviews are supposed to come from the heart.
You've always been correcting us in grammar, and I respect that, BUT YOU'RE
FUCKING ANNOYING. GO DIR IN A HOLE ALREADY YOU BASTARD! We are not
preschoolers that don't know the difference between there and their. WE KNOW
THINGS, IDIOT. You don't need to shove into our faces that you have better
grammar. This just shows the kind of conceited bastard you are.
Anyway, after telling you all about your reviewing faults, it's about time I
tell you this story's faults.
1. It lacks emotion. So what if you have the best grammar in the world! All of
that crap doesn't matter if you cant connect with your audience. Stories
aren't meant to show people how good you are at writing, it's used to convey
the feelings of the characters. EVERYTHING LACKED EMOTION. Emotion is the most
basic and important thing you need in a fic.
2. You're always complaining that we are so unoriginal. Well wake up dude!
Your first scene is a guy waking up. HOW FUCKING CLICHE IS THAT? If you're
complaining to us about unoriginality, go fix your problems first.
3. Your writing is TOO poetic. You lost my interest within the first sentence.
It took too long for a single thing to happen and your story really didnt get
anywhere.
SO IF YOU'RE GOING TO COMPLAIN ABOUT OUR WRITING, FIX YOUR FUCKING WORK TOO!
GO DIE IN A HOLE YOU DOUCHEBAG! And if you're offended by this review, GOOD!
This is exactly how everyone else feels! You fucking bastard.
-------------------
You have received a reply from the author, LiliNeko, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: Like It's Her Birthday
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6632240/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/998624/
--------------------
Farla,
Thank you so much for your honest and helpful review **hugs** And I do
apologize for posting one of my worst ego-fic that I've written/posted. I
kinda knew I had really rushed it, probably mainly because I lost interest in
it 3/4 of the way due to lack of time to work on it. But also I have a habit
of wanting things to be 'done' and 'over with' because I can't having
something laying around "unfinished".
I was having seconds thoughts of posting this or not and I guess I didn't go
with the better judgment ;p But thanks to your review it definitely set my
mind straight. Gonna take it down and re-vamp it later down the road when I
get the chance and also my beta-friend.
Also thank you so much for the grammar/sentences break down, I will be saving
this review and try my best taking notes from you. I always have a tough time
on my grammars because I keep on mixing it up with my nationality grammar ^^;
But reviews like these always pushes me for more improvements compared to the
last one. Thanks again, take care and ta-ta for now **hugs**
Lili
--------------------
Name: Charityx
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2675814/
--------------------
Subject: Kiss 'n' Tell
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6632713/
Thanks, I didn't actually have time to read through it once I was done so I
might have repeated some words by mistake.
Really? I didn't know that they were banned seeing as I've read loads of
songfics on here, so... and, if you hate them so much, then why bother reading
mine, just out of curiosity?
--------------------
Name: FlarePheonix1093
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1946212/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon GodTrainer
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6632480/
hey leave him alone the story is good!
--------------------
Name: Dryuu
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1064687/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Trapped in Another World: May
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6630785/
Stop making stupid advice that people don't need. PERIOD.
--------------------
Story: Butterfly Wings
Chapter: 1. The Second Day
From: sunshinedasies ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2648102/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=118567689
-------------------
I couldn't even finish the first chapter it was so bad- and I've read I'm
immortal and imma wisard- atleast there funny. your dull, unimaginative and
don't have an ounce of creativity in your body at all. what's worse is that
you flame other peoples work about absolutly tiny gramatical mistakes. at
least they are actually imaginative about there storys! and what's worse is
that you flame different peoples storys with the same review! and you wish
them to die! even if I hate a fic I would never wish bad things on that
person.
and before you ask your the first person I've ever written a review like this
for
-------------------
Did actually reply to this one to tell them the fic is "My Immortal". I'm not even entirely sure that's what they meant, but why not?
Story: Butterfly Wings
Chapter: 2. Departure
From: sunshinedasies ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2648102/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=118568703
-------------------
oh and I forgot to mention mewmewradish is my best friend and if you ever
send her a review like that again or tell her to go die in a fire or to anyone
else for that matter I won't hesitate to report you! your cruel and heartless
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