Authors, Part Eleven
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You have received a reply from the author, Drawing Flower, regarding the
review you posted for:
Title: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Weirdness!
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6638250/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2691898/
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Thanks for the advice
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You have received a reply from the author, Haku Namikaze, regarding the review
you posted for:
Title: Pokemon Evolutions: Darkness Rising
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6638132/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2430408/
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I don't need some stupid grammer lesson, and by the way, the names are proper
nouns in thebstory, you are just confusing me on this, nobodies perfect, I
make mistakes. Everybody does. Got it memorized? If not, read again.
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Name: Haku Namikaze
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2430408/
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Subject: Your Review
If you want to help me, just ask.
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Name: Killer of thy Cookies
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2381818/
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Subject: re: Your review to Taking Down Galactic
Umm... that's nice to know, but Pokemon are capitalized. Bulbapedia when
referring to Pokemon like Pikachu they'll say Pikachu even though it's not
Ash's Pikachu. For Trainers, it is also capitalized. I don't know if that's
the way, but that's my style, and I don't think I'm gonna change it anytime
soon.
Unsincerely, Killer of thy Cookies
P.S. By Unsincerely, it's just a pun. Don't take it seriously.
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You have received a reply from the author, Hot Limit, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: You Are the One
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6639420/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1435597/
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I was using the term very loosely. I should call it a flash fiction from now
on I suppose.
I will edit that. Sorry, that was not what I meant to say.
Thank you for the criticism!
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I'm not sure but I think this might be the first person to actually say they'd stop with the drabble thing.
You have received a reply from the author, mangaluva, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: Top Rat
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6639875/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1281433/
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I am aware of proper nouns, thank you, but since the only named Pokemon in
this fic is Blue's Raticate and it's always referring specifically to Blue's
Raticate, i'm a little confused as to what your problem is, especially since
Pokemon spcies names tend to be capitalized in official mediums as well :/
For a crack explanation, it does make a weird amount of sense XD
Unfortunately, it is uncommon and generally agreed to be bad practice to use
normal text for speech that's not coming from a person physically present,
which is why it's commonly used for remembered quotes as well as things said
over the phone, radio or television. I know this can get mixed up with
internal thoughts, but that's just an unfortunate limitation of the medium.
Thanks for your criticism, but please be aware that it can come off as rude or
condescending if you tell people that they "should" or "shouldn't" do
something. Better to say that something makes it clearer or more descriptive
or whatever.
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Name: A.J.Rowling
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1803344/
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Subject: re: Your review to Hopes Pokemon journey
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6629954/
Thanks for the advice and explaining to me how awful it was, i will try and
use what you told me in my story.Thats if i get enough positive reviews,in
which case i will continue writing this fic and separate the chapters.And
about the title,i realised that it may be quite common but the title does go
with the story.As it was my first fic i decided to go with a simple cliché
Pokemon journey.Thanks again
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And now, so much reviewing to catch up on...
review you posted for:
Title: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Weirdness!
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6638250/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2691898/
--------------------
Thanks for the advice
--------------------
You have received a reply from the author, Haku Namikaze, regarding the review
you posted for:
Title: Pokemon Evolutions: Darkness Rising
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6638132/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2430408/
--------------------
I don't need some stupid grammer lesson, and by the way, the names are proper
nouns in thebstory, you are just confusing me on this, nobodies perfect, I
make mistakes. Everybody does. Got it memorized? If not, read again.
--------------------
Name: Haku Namikaze
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2430408/
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Subject: Your Review
If you want to help me, just ask.
--------------------
Name: Killer of thy Cookies
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2381818/
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Subject: re: Your review to Taking Down Galactic
Umm... that's nice to know, but Pokemon are capitalized. Bulbapedia when
referring to Pokemon like Pikachu they'll say Pikachu even though it's not
Ash's Pikachu. For Trainers, it is also capitalized. I don't know if that's
the way, but that's my style, and I don't think I'm gonna change it anytime
soon.
Unsincerely, Killer of thy Cookies
P.S. By Unsincerely, it's just a pun. Don't take it seriously.
--------------------
You have received a reply from the author, Hot Limit, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: You Are the One
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6639420/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1435597/
--------------------
I was using the term very loosely. I should call it a flash fiction from now
on I suppose.
I will edit that. Sorry, that was not what I meant to say.
Thank you for the criticism!
--------------------
I'm not sure but I think this might be the first person to actually say they'd stop with the drabble thing.
You have received a reply from the author, mangaluva, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: Top Rat
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6639875/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1281433/
--------------------
I am aware of proper nouns, thank you, but since the only named Pokemon in
this fic is Blue's Raticate and it's always referring specifically to Blue's
Raticate, i'm a little confused as to what your problem is, especially since
Pokemon spcies names tend to be capitalized in official mediums as well :/
For a crack explanation, it does make a weird amount of sense XD
Unfortunately, it is uncommon and generally agreed to be bad practice to use
normal text for speech that's not coming from a person physically present,
which is why it's commonly used for remembered quotes as well as things said
over the phone, radio or television. I know this can get mixed up with
internal thoughts, but that's just an unfortunate limitation of the medium.
Thanks for your criticism, but please be aware that it can come off as rude or
condescending if you tell people that they "should" or "shouldn't" do
something. Better to say that something makes it clearer or more descriptive
or whatever.
--------------------
Name: A.J.Rowling
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1803344/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Hopes Pokemon journey
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6629954/
Thanks for the advice and explaining to me how awful it was, i will try and
use what you told me in my story.Thats if i get enough positive reviews,in
which case i will continue writing this fic and separate the chapters.And
about the title,i realised that it may be quite common but the title does go
with the story.As it was my first fic i decided to go with a simple cliché
Pokemon journey.Thanks again
--------------------
And now, so much reviewing to catch up on...
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