A new low...
Jan. 23rd, 2005 01:46 amI reviewed a new story a few hours ago, Aranel by Vulpix4Life. It's moronic - among other things, the idiot of a writer's giving the rapidash elfish names. (No, seriously: Lessien frowned at those names but suddenly thought of an old elfish name, Aranel. I couldn't imagine stuff this stupid.) And now I look at the reviews and see pokewrighter has made a comment.
don't listen to farla, she thinks too much. Over gramerizing a story like that can make it boring. Maybee someone should tell her that ponyta and rapidash arn't horses, so they might act differantly. altough I have a feeling that you could have combined the this chapter with the one your working on.
Yes. Over gramerizing.
don't listen to farla, she thinks too much. Over gramerizing a story like that can make it boring. Maybee someone should tell her that ponyta and rapidash arn't horses, so they might act differantly. altough I have a feeling that you could have combined the this chapter with the one your working on.
Yes. Over gramerizing.
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Date: 2005-01-23 09:46 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-01-23 11:14 am (UTC)The first sentence in the story is: "In the meadows just blow Ecruteak" and she expects us to take it serious? Peh. If I find it worthy I might even MST this one, like I did Melanie's Secret.
Morons.
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Date: 2005-01-23 04:44 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-01-23 06:55 pm (UTC)One thing I'm finding extremely amusing is The Matrill Legacy by skyzero. The author originally posted two chapters, both of which I reviewed. Now, in hindsight, my reviews were probably a little too harsh; anyway, he made a review trying to defend his story against all of my attacks, ending with something to the effect of "if you would've said 'nice job' after all of your complaining, it would have made me feel better about it." >_<
I was impatient and posted an anonymous rebuttal, since I'd already reviewed both chapters, which he went and deleted. Spineless worm. I went on to review the third chapter he'd just posted, and soon after he deleted the entire story, replacing it with a 'fixed' version, saying that he 'couldn't take the flames'.
The funny bit comes with Zyte's review, which points out a few of the spelling errors I was bugging him about that he seems to have refused to change. Maybe someone else saying it will convince him? He took my earlier reviews as a personal attack because I attacked his self-insert. Idiot.
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