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Name: Defenestration of the Mind
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1910238/
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Subject: re: Your review to Stardust

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6657700/

Thank you for your opinion.

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Name: Blibet
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2702207/
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Subject: re: Your review to World From A Sphere

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6658399/

I was aiming for a little confusion, yes. Considering our viewpoint character
is a child who can hardly remember the outside world, I thought it would be
fitting for the reader to be just as out of it as he was. That said, I do
understand how it could be tricky for people to follow.

More sentient pokemon will be appearing soon, and the narrative will hopefully
become more coherent later on as a result. Totodile will be maturing as well,
remember.

Thanks for the review!

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Name: cakedecorator
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2383310/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon DP Contest World!

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6658184/

Thanks for that info. I like the title, so why change it?

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You have received a reply from the author, MakeASong, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: Stupid Things I Won't Do
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6658131/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2516797/
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Well I've decided that I strictly want to focus on the characters, the
setting
is up to reader interprettation. I didn't want to create something vast or
with many a description, I wanted a vingette of these too characters Simply
being themselves.

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Story: Howls of Fear
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: The Finesseful X ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2653608/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=119358832
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Your style was good, but I think it should've been longer.

Finessefully,

X
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Story: My Own Kind
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: The Finesseful X ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2653608/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=119358960
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The dialogue was confusing, but the feel of the fic was good. You used (it's)
instead of (its) though.

Finessefully,

X
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I realize people are just trying to be annoying here, but why even bother?

Name: K9Player
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2169238/
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Subject: re: Your review to Left To Know

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6624821/

Ok, uh, i don't know if you care anymore or not.
I edited the first chapter to make it more understandable, i think for a while
now.
This was to just let you know.

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You have received a reply from the author, Kaiser dude, regarding the review
you posted for:

Title: New Journey
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6656994/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1865576/
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Not to sound picky or anything, but I'm having a hard time reading the first
part of the review.

The reason why I don't use 'said' is because it sounds bland and overused.

I don't get why you are picky about Kat having Archery as a skill. It is a
HOBBY of hers, NOT A SKILL!

As far as the weapon goes for the evil organization, the pokemon killing
technology ONLY AFFECTS POKEMON. IT DOES NOT WORK ON HUMANS. Shooting a
Pokemon with regular bullets would only have the same effect as regular
attacks from pokemon; that's just how I figure it to work. Please note that I
was trying to make it clear about the difference between dead and fainted
pokemon. It's to help readers know the difference. Also, please keep in mind
that some people who read may have learning disabilities like ADHD or
something that may make reading difficult. I write my stories with that in
mind, because I know what it's like to not understand something the first
time.

As for transitions, I'm still learning and improving. Do not judge me as a
professional writer and saying this is a sh*tty fanfic. I came to the site to
post fanfics and get ideas on how to improve.

I don't mean to ask this as something negative, but can you give me an easier
version of the review as a PM so I can better understand everything?

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