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You have received a reply from the author, SugarDropNeko, regarding the review
you posted for:

Title: Pokemon: The Return of Peril
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6680544/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2169906/
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I agree with all your views, I thank you for pointing out and giving me some
CC. But here are my reasonings for writing the way I did for that Chapter.

1) For species with the Pokemon, I've just assumed it was that since I've read
this snippets here and there on here that had it capitalized. Thank you for
pointing that out; I'll remember to do that in my drafts, and remember that
for future references.

2) Not really anything to say on that, I agree with your views on that art of
it as well, even if where I am it's slightly a bit abstract. Or that could be
my slow brain trying to process what you're saying.

3) To be completely honest, the word "said" drives me bonkers. It's too common
for my liking, even if the majority does it or it's the most convient to use.
I would use it, but I've learned to hate it so much since I've seen it used
repeatedly in short stories I've read in English class. Too. Over. Used. Which
is why I like to try to avoid it as much as possible and use synonyms. Plus
going on is always an interesting way to update my vocabulary. 8D

4) As for your question, I like to think of Rhett as a hungry animal that
likes to play with it's prey before it kills and eats it. In this case, he had
intended to kill the man from the beginning but wanted to make the old man's
last moments interesting. I can see why you would think he'd be trying too
hard, but he only tries hard to impress the boss of Team Skyline.

I hope that answered your questions. I also appreciate the fact you came to
read one of the many Pokemon fan fictions on this site.If you can give me more
CC in the future on my writings on how to improve it, I'd love it. I write in
my spare time to improve; as I wish to become a writer when I get older.

Anyway, to conclude with that thanks for the review. ;D

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Name: Blue-Cookies44
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2316052/
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Subject: re: Your review to I

I don't have a beta reader and i'm not sure how to get one.

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You have received a reply from the author, Fallen Vanguard, regarding the
review you posted for:

Title: To Dust
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682619/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/997323/
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Thank you for calling, your opinion matters

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You have received a reply from the author, disclaimer065, regarding the review
you posted for:

Title: Tryst
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6681348/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2463464/
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Writing doesn't always have to be literal. Headaches aren't actual pains in
your brain, but they certainly FEEL like that, no?

Yes, you would. It's commonly accepted within the Pokemon fandom to do so.
Pokemon may or may not be unique in this regard (I couldn't be bothered to
check), but that is simply the way it is.

Technically, yes, she got raped. That's not the reason it's in "Humor." The
reason it is in "Humor" is that it contains several jokes and outright makes
fun of a factor in the games.


Don't get me wrong, I want reviews that raise valid points and are more than
just, "Hey, great job, keep writing!" but a review that could easily be
mistaken for a troll review (and is, quite frankly, wrong) does neither.

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Name: Bahamut PURE
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/867532/
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Subject: re: Your review to Going Off The Deep End

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6683491/

Thanks for the advice, but if you don't like the subject matter, perhaps you
shouldn't read the fic.

And all current source material treats each Pokemon's name as a proper noun,
which is why I do so as well. Again, however, thank you for the grammar
lesson. I'll be sure to keep it in mind.

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You have received a reply from the author, iR4WR, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: In My Head
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682345/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2429761/
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There's drabble in its true sense and drabble in the "under a thousand words"
sense. I took the latter meaning, as even if it's incorrect it's still use in
that way.

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You have received a reply from the author, Graywind, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: Aspire
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6684239/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1978826/
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Thanks for the advice and revision Farla. I appreciate your review for Aspire.
I like all that you pointed out :)

For the capitalizaton of the words I chose, I do that because I like the way
it looks and find it easer to read. Pikachu compared to pikachu doesnt seem
right to me. With me naming the species of a certain Pokemon it seemed
appropriate to capitalize. Advise me if I'm still wrong.

The part with the feminine scream...did that offend you? Sorry if it did but I
used the word to describe the scream because the character is male and for a
male to scream that way...you get me right? :)

Also, I do have a plot. The summary may not give it clarity but I'd rather
give it in chapters rather than spilling it all on an 11 page or so document.
I'll make it interesting to read for other reviewers as I progress in my story
and writing style. If you continue to read and review Aspire (which I hope you
will) then I'm sure you'll notice what the plot is, where it's going, and pay
attention to the small cues of what's going to happen next.

Again, thank you for reviewing Farla.

~Graywind

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Name: lordfreakinraptorVo
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2677559/
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Subject: re: Your review to Home Is Where The Heart Is

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6681924/

Thank you very much for the review. I'll be sure to watch out for errors like
that in the future with more caution. c:

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You have received a reply from the author, blackdragon333, regarding the
review you posted for:

Title: No Longer Alone
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6684311/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1098081/
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Thanks for your rather rude review. Constructive criticism would've been
fine, but yours was just condescending. You're entitled to your own opinion,
I suppose, so I'm not going to bother refuting any 'points' you've made.
However, the color-changing eyes? Mine do that, which is why I can describe
it. If you didn't have anything helpful to say, you could've just kept your
opinion to yourself.

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Name: Ten Commandments
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1237979/
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Subject: re: Your review to How To Win At Chess

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6682896/

...That's all you cared about... Okay.

I normally get upset when I'm given advice, but things have changed for me
since then. I will try this proper style instead of mine and see how it
works... Although I'm a bit cross eyed over the thoughts not being used with
', since some people won't tell the difference between thoughts and speech
without 'em.

Thank you for your helpful tips.

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You have received a reply from the author, pokemon brain, regarding the review
you posted for:

Title: Pokemon Ranger: Shadows of Alimia
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6683435/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2504180/
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It's the Prologue, not a first Chapter. Anyway, thanks for the review. I'm
cracking on with the first chapter as I type.

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Date: 2011-01-29 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ember-reignited.livejournal.com
I can't even figure out what "factor in the games" it's supposed to be making fun of. Fire Pokémon getting hurt by water? Flareon having impossibly high body temperatures? Not that that's what really matters here, but.

Date: 2011-01-29 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] farla.livejournal.com
Maybe that pokemon can crossbreed? Given how terrible at communicating they seem it might just mean that the story's taking pokemon and writing without taking any of it seriously.

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