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You have received a reply from the author, Juenne Femme, regarding the review
you posted for:

Title: A Face
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6684773/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1554492/

Thankyou for the criticism, I'll take it all under consideration and make
alterations, though some may not be to your specifications.


You have received a reply from the author, Akatsuki Sakura Uchiha, regarding
the review you posted for:

Title: 恋人 The Lover
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6685899/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2018621/

Thank you for telling me that. As you know I didn't write this but give me the
permission to post it in my account. I'll start rereading it again and fix all
the mistakes here.
So thanks again!!!

You have received a reply from the author, IsmAsm, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: A Matter of Loyalty
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6685549/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2032202/

Thank you for the review. I've seen many different ways of capatlization of
Pokemon, and I'm following the ways I've seen most often at Bulbapedia. Most
of your questions are going to be answered in layer chapters, if you want to
keep reading. Getting legitimate criticism is a nice change of pace, so again
I thank you.

Name: Shadougelover14
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2469814/

Subject: re: Your review to I'm Not Him

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6679644/

Ok, 1, (yeah, I didn't spell it out!), giving me a mile long paragraph on
something that could take only 2 sentences to explaiin to me doesn't help me.
2, I'm not the only person whose brought an OC out of nowhere. Lot's of people
do, and Ivory and Lilly are based off game characters, Soulsilver and emerald.
Paul will be explained once I get to it, but I wanted to post this first cuz I
like Silver's character.3, I'm not the only one who capitalizes Pokemon names
such as Pikachu or Bayleaf. I think Pokemon and their names are proper nouns.
I've seen another reveiw you wrote and you put the same thing about that. And
finally 4, the hello paragraph is still confusing me. WHERE do you see me
putting hello wrong? Just TELL me! I'm not trying to be mean, but your reviews
are kinda confusing me.

You have received a reply from the author, PKMN-breeder-Estelle, regarding the
review you posted for:

Title: Pokemon Adventures
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6687615/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2717625/

Its pretty easy to see that the paragraphs alternate between Amara and
Estelle. This is just a roleplaying script between me and a friend, I didn't
put a header or a footer like most do, and I wasn't asking for critique
because this is just an RP that my friend and I do for fun. Its a shamelessly
thrown together mess. We know that. That's pretty obvious. That's why it has a
lame title and bad grammar. My profile is all about the character I play, its
pretty obvious that its a roleplay that I post as a story to share ideas and
experiences with other roleplayers. The roleplay has a story, but its not on
the same time demand as a regular story, since its based on the people acting
it out.
Thank you, but no thank you on your review, the reviews we are looking for are
on the actual story, not how it is presented.

Name: pkmnfankael92
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2718112/

Subject: midnight flight for 2

thank you for taking the time to read my story. i was drunk and tired when i
wrote that story. idk what i was thinking i wrote that on note pad lol.

You have received a reply from the author, Alando, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: I'll Protect You
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6688227/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2054417/

Look I know your trying to be helpful, and I'm grateful for that. But in my
eyes as long as FF has no problems with what I write, I see no reason to
change it. Again thank you for trying to help.

Name: LucyMoon1992
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2185845/

Subject: Thanks for your review!

Hi :)

Just wanted to say thanks for the constructive criticism, if that's what it
was. I can see from your homepage that you obviously leave a lot of reviews,
most of them negative. Obviously you have written a lot of stories on Pokemon,
way more than me and so I'm happy you took the time to review my story but
being my first Pokemon story, I feel you didn't really need to be so harsh.
Thank you for the spell-check but as for the Brock/Misty talk, this is my
story and I want it to go this way. Other people have reviewed it and liked it
and also I was not stating that everyone flushes red and says 'No it doesn't
hurt, its OK,' -I'm British, that is how we spell it here and note that the
lanuage is ENGLISH, Yank, not American, so you can go jump off a cliff before
correcting me on how to write and speak my own language- this is how I wanted
to portray Misty feeling nervous about Brock knowing what she was dreaming

Anyway, thanks babes, you SO opened my eyes, cheers!



You have received a reply from the author, deeman45, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: Storm Clouds II
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682749/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2097371/

Thanks for the advice--I always did have trouble figuring out punctuation in
regards to quotations. I'm going to continue capitalizing species names,
however; I've never seen Nintendo refer to a pokemon species without
capitalization and I'm going to defer to the source material on that one.

Name: bijouie
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2428045/

Subject: re: Your review to undercurrents

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6679240/


Thanks so much for your input; it's very much appreciated. I've heard of you
throughout the fandom (actually, I've asked you to review something of mine
before too, I think) and I was surprised to see that you took the time to
review something of mine. I'm kind of flattered, really. I don't find your
reviews too harsh nor are they "flames" I find them great. So thank you.

"The air conditioning filled the room like an arrant wind."

I don't quite see a problem with that. I used arrant in the correct context
(the word itself does mean "extreme" - or at least that's what the Merriam
Webster dictionary says - and that was what I meant) Could you explain what is
wrong with that?

I'm sorry that you didn't like the piece (you didn't outwardly say that you
didn't enjoy the story but it's just an assumption on my part that you weren't
fond of it) and I do agree with you on the whole pretentious bit. I have no
excuses for using words that I am quite well versed with (such as archaic,
which is not used in the correct context in the story.) and using a style that
is bordering on the point (and, in some parts, is) purple prose. I feel
terribly embarrassed that you had to read such - to be blunt - utter crap.

"Despite being absurdly dull and plain, it was completely and inexplicably
otherworldly . . . " what I meant with that little bit is that, even though
the dress itself wasn't beautiful or remarkable or anything of that sort, it
brought forth a feeling in Lyra that reminded her of a life without war.

I understand that the piece itself is utterly repulsive and completely and
totally hideous. I could have taken the time to overlook it/edit more but
instead I just rushed through the writing process and barely skimmed over it.
I did not portray what I wanted to and that, in the end, is a great

Again, thanks for your input. It means the world to me that you took the time
to actually give me helpful critique. Thank you. I hope you review more of my
pieces and continue to give good reviews. :)

x bijouie

Name: Love.Lust.PixieDust
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2625042/

Subject: re: Your review to Did you put laxatives in my coffee!

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6685835/

Okay, thanks for the heads up! Sorry, I hope my grammar wasn't too bad.
Usually I'm pretty good with that. Well, I hope you enjoyed the story anyways.
:) If not, that's cool too.


Date: 2011-01-30 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
And finally 4, the hello paragraph is still confusing me. WHERE do you see me putting hello wrong? Just TELL me! I'm not trying to be mean, but your reviews are kinda confusing me.

Oh my god, it's not just depressingly possible, it's true. Sobbb.

Date: 2011-01-30 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] farla.livejournal.com
I wonder if putting "for example" in the paragraph would help. Probably not, sadly, but I guess it's worth a try.


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