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You have received a reply from the author, togekiss, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: white noise
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6688569/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2458320/
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Well, okay, thank you for the constructive criticism. I'll keep that in mind
and, if I get the chance, perhaps I'll fix the story.

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You have received a reply from the author, fringeperson, regarding the review
you posted for:

Title: Catching One
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6687612/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1424477/
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thank you for the critisisms, I will take another look at the story, though no
promises to change it at all.

Creepy? Okay. I guess my sense of humour is kinda twisted. It made me laugh
anyway.

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Name: turtwig163
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2652077/
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Subject: re: Your review to Turt's Hoenn Journey

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6695050/

I'll take your story intro advice into consideration. I've planned to have the
stories always open up with the waking up of the main character but hey, I'll
take variiation into consideration.

I'm not the best at pinpointing grammatical mistakes because I'm the type of
person who likes to read things quickly. I don't mind little mistakes like
'whre' but gramatical mistakes such as 'pot' and 'pit' do catch my attention.
EX: I was boiling the pasta in my trusty old metal pit.

Thanks for the capitalization tip.

And yes, that was convinient. As in the story, Brendan already recieved his
starter narrowing down the choices Birch had to a 50/50 chance. Hey, I felt
lucky. Then again, I am considering the events that would have taken place if
Turt hadn't grabbed Treecko...

-Turt

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You have received a reply from the author, SirAmbala, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: Setting Sun
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6693688/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1078663/
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When I first read your review I wasn't sure how to react. I will be the first
to admit that my writing abilities are not what they should be for someone my
age, but even so I can't help but be somewhat defensive with my stories. I
also know though that the point of a review is not supposed to be sunshine and
daisies. That is why I want to thank you for your honesty, and I will try to
use your review to better my writing. To this day I wish my teachers would
have taught us the fundamentals of writing properly. Instead they were worried
about how our lettering looked as upposed to the content. I am generally
curious as to whether you actually enjoy reading fanfiction, it seems as
though it kills you to do so. Or do you just enjoy criticing

I

I

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Name: Caffekko
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1929067/
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Subject: Review Reply

Hi! You reviewed my story 'Life without Love is Shortcake without
Strawberries'.

I just want to say thank you for the advice regarding dialogue and I had no
idea drabble was exactly 100 words 0.o so thanks for pointing that out! I
don't think it's really my sort of thing, after trying a few...

I'll stick to humour from now on! xD

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This is pretty much the only time someone's actually accepted the drabble thing instead of whining that in their interpretation a drabble is something else, so good for them.

You have received a reply from the author, GardevoirLove4ever, regarding the
review you posted for:

Title: Pokemon: the Same at Heart
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6696064/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2560608/
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You're really starting to piss me off...If you hate my stories so much than
don't read them you little flaming bitch! I'm blocking you, I just want you to
know that.

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Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Too lazy to make an account ()
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I love how you brutally review other stories, to the point where its hurtful,
like the elist you are and then don't follow your own advice.

I was thinking "Hm. Well. If this person is so adamant that her reviews are
helpful, maybe I should have a look at her stories". But it turns out I wasted
my time.

Your stories and plots are as bland as they come, even with decent grammar.

Maybe if you'd get off your high-horse, people would have some respect for you
as a writer. Just saying.
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The ironic thing here is that this month has established that the one thing people do have respect for me as is as a writer.

Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Sorry ()
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Couldn't get passed the first chapter too long and detailed about nothing in
particular.
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Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Zgirl259 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2207913/ )
Reply URL: http://login.fanfiction.net/review_pm.php?reviewid=120071505
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Wow. Now I see why you gave me such a bad review. You're angry that people
bash you so you bash others in return.

Just like a grade school bully.

I have to admit, this isn't very good.

You spend way too much time on a single scene and frankly it's boring.

Cut out things that are unnecessary, like some kid babbling about how he isn't
hungry.

Sound familiar?

Treat others how you want to be treated.

Any five year old knows that.
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Name: YoWhatsUp
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2513516/
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Subject: re: Your review to A Pokemon Adventure

Thanks for the review. I wrote this fanfic in 5 mins. So, I didn't really care
much about grammer or the proper use of quotations. But, I didn't realize that
I spelled charmander wrong. I always pronounce it char-a-mander, so I assumed
that is how it was spelled. I'm probably going to change that in the story.

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Name: Sacred-Wolf-Aquamarine
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2573913/
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Subject: re: Your review to Wolves of Mt Coronet : Book One

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6695060/

Why do you care? Why do you keep reading my stories if you hate them?

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You have received a reply from the author, animatedrose, regarding the review
you posted for:

Title: Pokemon: Coldest
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6695590/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1344360/
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Everyone has their own opinion on whether to capitalize Pokemon species names.
I choose to because I'm used to doing that.

I admit that the ending seems a bit rushed but it was all I could come up
with. I might just put the part involving the events after Isis' death in a
second chapter later. Dunno...

I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!

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