Thanks, have a cookie. It's real, it's just...um, invisible. Yeah.
That's a good idea for the first line you mention, I'll edit. And 'she asked' is actually supposed to go with dialogue, I forgot I was using >< with that, so it doesn't show up. Slice is supposed to ask "How long do you think they’ll keep ignoring this?"
I'll see what I can do about the descriptions, but she really doesn't understand his emotions, so she's not very clear. The same thing happens in the first part when she's speaking. She's not sure why the rattata cares or even what it is.
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Re: Little orange with all that ice
Date: 2004-06-19 05:54 pm (UTC)That's a good idea for the first line you mention, I'll edit. And 'she asked' is actually supposed to go with dialogue, I forgot I was using >< with that, so it doesn't show up. Slice is supposed to ask "How long do you think they’ll keep ignoring this?"
I'll see what I can do about the descriptions, but she really doesn't understand his emotions, so she's not very clear. The same thing happens in the first part when she's speaking. She's not sure why the rattata cares or even what it is.