Chapter Eight of Ice
Jan. 21st, 2006 02:54 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
farlaChapter Eight, Trial Run, of Ice is up.
Yes, I know I took forever. This chapter was a bitch to write, mainly because I realized I have no idea how Team Rocket functions. I also had problems referring to the different kids, as the child ignores names and although she'd be able to follow a 'other kid', 'other other kid' and 'other other other kid' naming system, I think you guys might kill me for it.
This is also maybe the fifth or sixth rewrite of the chapter. Among other things, the child takes a much less active role than in previous versions.
Yes, I know I took forever. This chapter was a bitch to write, mainly because I realized I have no idea how Team Rocket functions. I also had problems referring to the different kids, as the child ignores names and although she'd be able to follow a 'other kid', 'other other kid' and 'other other other kid' naming system, I think you guys might kill me for it.
This is also maybe the fifth or sixth rewrite of the chapter. Among other things, the child takes a much less active role than in previous versions.
Less active?
Date: 2006-03-15 10:21 pm (UTC)Re: Less active?
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