Personally, I'm really hoping there will be a 'lesson' on how to make your writing more 'interesting' by using synonyms you barely understand and piling descriptive words into sentences. After all, she has the sentence "...just in time to see a Poliwrath send a Totodile into the deep end with a jetstream of water.. The aqua colored crocodilian Pokémon floated to the surface..." If we're really, really lucky, she might even tell us to turn 'eyes' into 'orbs'. That would be beautifully ironic. Cross your digit-like appendages!
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Re: Out of the darkness comes LadyUmbra the light!
Date: 2004-08-16 08:15 pm (UTC)If we're really, really lucky, she might even tell us to turn 'eyes' into 'orbs'. That would be beautifully ironic. Cross your digit-like appendages!