Unoriginality Ch28

[farla]

Regarding Ralts, the twenty-eighth chapter of Unoriginality is up.

I was going to say something about how strange it is people vote for Unoriginality again, but then realized that the way the poll works right now, I just don't update until it hits something like Unoriginality where the chapter is already long done and I just wasn't satisfied with it (I'm not satisfied with it - I'm not sure I got the idea across and I hate it when my author's notes are that disproportionate to the story). So it's actually very smart to vote for that. Kudos, wisdom of the masses, kudos.

Comments

[purplekitte.livejournal.com]

If nothing else, having a Ralts is no substitute for having characterization. That's telling not showing and it tends to contradict everything else that's being shown in your average story.