Playing on Fanlib

Decided to post a written version of an old nightmare over on Fanlib, Bene. Titling it, I was pleased OpenOffice immediately offered to complete the word as Benediction. Clearly we are on the same wavelength. When the computers make me overlord, I promise to be an enlightened despot.

More Fanlib

So apparently the average fanlib denizen lacks self-preservation skills.

Here's the story. Try to pinpoint when a mistake is made.

( Moderately long story is moderately long cut! )