So what I've learned here is people get really cranky about short things

Farla,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: The First Battle of the First War
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Beta profile (Guest)
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Beta profile:Not trying to be mean, your works can be barely judged as fanfic, it sounds
more like an essay or article or a specific summarization of a small even not story at
all, you should not pop out to criticize in other fanfic authors' stories when you are
not better or even lesser than them. Criticism is vital term and you can't ridicule it by
being total pointess in action.

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