Authors, Part 16
Apr. 17th, 2010 07:59 pmName: TerraTor4
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2202872/
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Subject: My Story
Okay, I just saw your review for my story. I will tell you right now that it
is not a summery. It IS a prologe. A summery recaps what happened in
something, this is about what WILL happen after Ethans journey in Johto and
during his and Lyra's journey in Sinnoh. That is why it is called Pokemon
Johto Journeys 2 and not 1. I am sorry for confusing you with the title, but
it says it in the title of the chapter, it says it in the description, and in
the story. It IS a prologue.
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Suddenly, those stories with that lay out the whole plot via prophesy seem so subtle.
And we now have crazy liftoff, as they've shown up to continue arguing that a summary of events is not a summary on the forum.
Title: From Boy to Legend
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5891957/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2147897/
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Your a jerk. I'm bad at spelling and grammar. And I'm in 7th grade so leave me
alone with the spelling.
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Name: PokemonRangerRye
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2052021/
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Subject: re: Your review to Johto's Only Option
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5899958/
I fixed the mistakes, and no, she just likes the gem silver
she's not a marysue
its just that Red gave her that gemstone necklace thing, and she tresures it
every since he dissapeared
thank you for the suggestions, I will try to keep these things in mind
there is only one thing I can't stand on this site
when you get a review and someone points out every little mistake
I'm not saying anything mean or anything, I just can't stand it.
I find it is better if the author finds mistake on their own
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Name: Cyrius Wolfe
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2100704/
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Subject: re: Your review to Goldenrod PD: The Hardy Files
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5878415/
Thanks for the review. Yea, I realized the chapter is very short and
uninformative, but it was an idea I'm working with. I'm also thinking about
rewriting it when I find the best way to start. Also, thanks about the blonde.
It's a habit I've developed in adding an -e to something.
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You have received a reply from the author, Mantineus, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: Spiegelbilder I
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5891033/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1022018/
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What is so confusing about it? Oh, that might be it, you didn't listen to the
song. The song is basically about the Apocolypse. The secret is also revealed
in the song, but I chose to take it out to make it better and leave the reader
wondering what it is...Unless they know what, through supernatural influence,
what can make a man fall over and never wake up?
Thank you for the help and the review.
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Name: GrossologyFanAllMyLife
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2285656/
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Subject: re: Your review to HalfBreed
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5895292/
Farla, I understand that you wanted to correct her, but don't ya think said it
a little meanly. I mean, come on, everyone on this website should know how to
write a paragraph and know when to capitalize words. And you're not the only
one who likes to correct people. (I know not to start sentences off with and.)
Why, I do it almost everyday! It's quite fun, except that after you correct
them, they say something like: "Why do you always correct people so much?!"
They act like it's so appalling when it's not.
Anyway, lighten up a bit. Okay?
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Title: High School love sucks
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5901937/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1481159/
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Thanks your ever kind words of wisdom. ^^
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Name: Taco Chalupa
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2326702/
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Subject: re: Your review to One of Luck
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5901143/
WAIT, so you know how Pokeballs work? TELL ME
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Name: RosarioVampireBoy
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2004359/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon Adventure Kyles Journey
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5892505/
if you dont like it fuck off this is my story ill write it how I want it so
fuck off or get off
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Name: RosarioVampireBoy
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2004359/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon Adventure Kyles Journey
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5892505/
also this is my freaking story if I want him to be 13 then he is 13 you dont
choose no one is perfect in writing a story your just being a freaking jerk my
stories are to myself
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