Authors, Part 26
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farlaName: Knight of the Fail
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2126884/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Shapeshifter's Mistakes
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5914400/
I didn't forget my own storyline. Nareth didn't understand them at the time
because he was so panicked it sounded like gibberish to him. I was trying to
imagine this from the perspective of a tiny creature who was listening to
these huge, loud creatures who his mother basically describes as monsters.
Once he calms down, he can process what they're saying. Guess I didn't make it
clear enough, eh? ^^;
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Nareth's just bragging, really. He's proud. And as will be explained later,
Mews are a LOT rarer than Shaymin.
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Considering that my point was based it being stupid to say they couldn't understand his words...
Name: Knight of the Fail
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2126884/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Shapeshifter's Mistakes
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5914400/
But... every form of Pokemon canon capitalises species names, so I do too.
Just because it's not proper English doesn't mean it's wrong to canon.
--
I wanted to show how much Nareth valued his mother - as far as he thinks,
"Mother" is both a title and name, and it's his way of expressing his respect
for her. I don't usually write like that. I just wanted to give Nareth a
unique way of referring to his mother.
--
I know my grammar could use some work. Always grateful for the advice.
--
This is actually a typo left over from when I was editing this for DeviantArt.
(HTML tag that got messed up) I'll correct it shortly.
--
... and they're also very young Mews who like to tease their brother? They
didn't mean it, they were just playing. Nareth can't see past that.
--
Really? Well, that's your opinion. Doesn't mean it's the same as every one
else's. Everyone has a different view on how these things work.
--
He was panicking, and he's used to relying on his mother for protection. I'm
trying to establish his character. He's a coward at heart.
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Name: HappyHereford
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1807184/
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Subject: Re: Review
Suck it up, princess. I'll make my stories as long or as short as I want.
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You have received a reply from the author, UnwrittenTale, regarding the review
you posted for:
Title: Revitalize
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5924495/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2094702/
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Thank you for taking your time to review! This is my first Pokemon fiction so
I appreciate the advice. :) I wasn't really sure how to write Mewtwo's
telepathic thoughts, but thanks for clearing it up. I'm glad that you pointed
out Mewtwo was a bit OOC, at least I know for next time what I have to work
on. Thanks again!
~Unwrittentale
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Name: HappyHereford
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1807184/
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Subject: Re:
I'd like to apologise for my earlier email, it was rude of me to reply as
such, and I'm sorry for that.
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An intriguing update on the bizarroverse issue!
Name: Blakeface
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1433025/
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Subject: re: Your review to Satellite
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5895985/
Thank you for your comments!
I'm afraid I don't have much else to return, because you understood what I was
going for in the fic, so...thank you, haha!
And of course, thank you for reading, as well.
~Tex
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You have received a reply from the author, brickbyboringbrick15, regarding the
review you posted for:
Title: The Chemical
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5925338/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2263350/
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Well its my story so I can write what I want ACTUALLY. Just because YOU don't
like it that doesn't mean I'm going to change it. Get over yourself!
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Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: brickbyboringbrick15 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2263350/ )
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Wow. I almost fell asleep whilst reading this. The idea is stupid and boring.
Give up, because you're no good at writing. You don't have the right to insult
others because your writing is crap to.
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Story: Butterfly Wings
Chapter: 1. The Second Day
From: brickbyboringbrick15 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2263350/ )
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Yawn.
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Story: Dämmerung
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: brickbyboringbrick15 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2263350/ )
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K this story is pathetic. Who the hell are you to insult me when your writing
is a load of crap in itself?
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Kinda weird how my flames seem to be getting progressively less detailed.
Name: keeyote
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2338560/
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Subject: re: Your review to Heart of Gold, Soul of Silver: I've Got Neither
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5925229/
I only posted the bio because I didn't want to have a huge background story, I
kind of just wanted to get right into it.
From what I heard, Pokemon is capitalized. So is things like Charizard. I've
never really thought why, but that's how it goes. That's the way Bulbapedia
does it at least.
I never really focused on paragraphing because I never wanted to get concerned
about all the rules of writing. Usually, I just want to get things done
without thinking about it, and since this isn't a serious writing, then I
don't believe I should focus too much on it. If it really is a problem, I
suppose I could fix it.
And finally, those quotes don't help me at all. I'm not really the smartest
person, so I would rather have things explained. Plus, Axel doesn't
necessarily think selling stolen goods are wrong, but selling a Pokemon. It's
almost like stealing a little girl's puppy.
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This is the "selling them is wrong, but stealing them for horrible experiments is okay!" one.
Name: ChocolateMilkLOL
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2279499/
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Subject: re: Your review to A New Beginning
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5906172/
Jeez u don't have to spaz... anyways if u want me to change the title then i
will also i know that the first chapter was too short... I'm writing
looooonger ones after that...
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Name: Ambitus of Umbra
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1987030/
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Subject: re: Your review to Illusion of Sevii
Sorry, I don't want to start a grammar war but here I go. Pokémon and the
species themselves are all treated as proper nouns. I'll fix the your/you're
switch now. Also, I will cut down on the dialogue a little bit.
--------------------
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2126884/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to The Shapeshifter's Mistakes
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5914400/
I didn't forget my own storyline. Nareth didn't understand them at the time
because he was so panicked it sounded like gibberish to him. I was trying to
imagine this from the perspective of a tiny creature who was listening to
these huge, loud creatures who his mother basically describes as monsters.
Once he calms down, he can process what they're saying. Guess I didn't make it
clear enough, eh? ^^;
--
Nareth's just bragging, really. He's proud. And as will be explained later,
Mews are a LOT rarer than Shaymin.
-------------------
Considering that my point was based it being stupid to say they couldn't understand his words...
Name: Knight of the Fail
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2126884/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to The Shapeshifter's Mistakes
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5914400/
But... every form of Pokemon canon capitalises species names, so I do too.
Just because it's not proper English doesn't mean it's wrong to canon.
--
I wanted to show how much Nareth valued his mother - as far as he thinks,
"Mother" is both a title and name, and it's his way of expressing his respect
for her. I don't usually write like that. I just wanted to give Nareth a
unique way of referring to his mother.
--
I know my grammar could use some work. Always grateful for the advice.
--
This is actually a typo left over from when I was editing this for DeviantArt.
(HTML tag that got messed up) I'll correct it shortly.
--
... and they're also very young Mews who like to tease their brother? They
didn't mean it, they were just playing. Nareth can't see past that.
--
Really? Well, that's your opinion. Doesn't mean it's the same as every one
else's. Everyone has a different view on how these things work.
--
He was panicking, and he's used to relying on his mother for protection. I'm
trying to establish his character. He's a coward at heart.
--------------------
Name: HappyHereford
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1807184/
--------------------
Subject: Re: Review
Suck it up, princess. I'll make my stories as long or as short as I want.
--------------------
You have received a reply from the author, UnwrittenTale, regarding the review
you posted for:
Title: Revitalize
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5924495/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2094702/
--------------------
Thank you for taking your time to review! This is my first Pokemon fiction so
I appreciate the advice. :) I wasn't really sure how to write Mewtwo's
telepathic thoughts, but thanks for clearing it up. I'm glad that you pointed
out Mewtwo was a bit OOC, at least I know for next time what I have to work
on. Thanks again!
~Unwrittentale
--------------------
Name: HappyHereford
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1807184/
--------------------
Subject: Re:
I'd like to apologise for my earlier email, it was rude of me to reply as
such, and I'm sorry for that.
--------------------
An intriguing update on the bizarroverse issue!
Name: Blakeface
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1433025/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Satellite
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5895985/
Thank you for your comments!
I'm afraid I don't have much else to return, because you understood what I was
going for in the fic, so...thank you, haha!
And of course, thank you for reading, as well.
~Tex
--------------------
You have received a reply from the author, brickbyboringbrick15, regarding the
review you posted for:
Title: The Chemical
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5925338/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2263350/
--------------------
Well its my story so I can write what I want ACTUALLY. Just because YOU don't
like it that doesn't mean I'm going to change it. Get over yourself!
--------------------
Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: brickbyboringbrick15 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2263350/ )
-------------------
Wow. I almost fell asleep whilst reading this. The idea is stupid and boring.
Give up, because you're no good at writing. You don't have the right to insult
others because your writing is crap to.
-------------------
Story: Butterfly Wings
Chapter: 1. The Second Day
From: brickbyboringbrick15 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2263350/ )
-------------------
Yawn.
-------------------
Story: Dämmerung
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: brickbyboringbrick15 ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2263350/ )
-------------------
K this story is pathetic. Who the hell are you to insult me when your writing
is a load of crap in itself?
-------------------
Kinda weird how my flames seem to be getting progressively less detailed.
Name: keeyote
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2338560/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Heart of Gold, Soul of Silver: I've Got Neither
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5925229/
I only posted the bio because I didn't want to have a huge background story, I
kind of just wanted to get right into it.
From what I heard, Pokemon is capitalized. So is things like Charizard. I've
never really thought why, but that's how it goes. That's the way Bulbapedia
does it at least.
I never really focused on paragraphing because I never wanted to get concerned
about all the rules of writing. Usually, I just want to get things done
without thinking about it, and since this isn't a serious writing, then I
don't believe I should focus too much on it. If it really is a problem, I
suppose I could fix it.
And finally, those quotes don't help me at all. I'm not really the smartest
person, so I would rather have things explained. Plus, Axel doesn't
necessarily think selling stolen goods are wrong, but selling a Pokemon. It's
almost like stealing a little girl's puppy.
--------------------
This is the "selling them is wrong, but stealing them for horrible experiments is okay!" one.
Name: ChocolateMilkLOL
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2279499/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to A New Beginning
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5906172/
Jeez u don't have to spaz... anyways if u want me to change the title then i
will also i know that the first chapter was too short... I'm writing
looooonger ones after that...
--------------------
Name: Ambitus of Umbra
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1987030/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Illusion of Sevii
Sorry, I don't want to start a grammar war but here I go. Pokémon and the
species themselves are all treated as proper nouns. I'll fix the your/you're
switch now. Also, I will cut down on the dialogue a little bit.
--------------------
