Pokemon Revolution Ch6
Oct. 15th, 2006 02:07 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
farlaSo Chapter Six of Pokemon Revolution is up.
This chapter I continue down the slippery slope of editing. First it was fixing up outright mistakes. Then rewording scenes. Then deleting scenes. Then rewriting scenes. Now it's adding scenes entirely - given aforementioned deleting and rewording, I had to add a scene at the end to establish what Ice and Wildfire are doing this time around because they're in the next chapter and so far, haven't even been introduced as being part of Eon's group.
I am somewhat pleased by how I worked it out though - it matches up well with later chapters and makes a great deal more sense. Admittedly that's not saying much given that the original made less than no sense, but it's something. I also managed to explain away what the hell a pidgeot was doing in an attack on a cave.
This chapter I continue down the slippery slope of editing. First it was fixing up outright mistakes. Then rewording scenes. Then deleting scenes. Then rewriting scenes. Now it's adding scenes entirely - given aforementioned deleting and rewording, I had to add a scene at the end to establish what Ice and Wildfire are doing this time around because they're in the next chapter and so far, haven't even been introduced as being part of Eon's group.
I am somewhat pleased by how I worked it out though - it matches up well with later chapters and makes a great deal more sense. Admittedly that's not saying much given that the original made less than no sense, but it's something. I also managed to explain away what the hell a pidgeot was doing in an attack on a cave.
