The ones saying it's a mary sue and offering concrit on an obvious troll (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3220277/1/), which opens with: DISCLAIMER: THIS IS MY FIC!!! NO STEALING!!! I MADE IT UP!! WEATHERSTAR IS MY CHARACTER AND SO IS HER POKEMON BEGBI!! PLEASE DON'T STEAL IT OK AND DON'T CALL HER A SUE EITHER SHE'S NOT A MARY SUE. SHE HAS FAULTS AND SHE'S LOST A TON OF BATTLES. WELL I JUST MADE HER UP NOW, BUT IN MY OTHER STORIES SHE'S GOING TO LOSE LOTS OF BATTLES. SO SHE'S NOT A MARY SUE!!! AND YES THIS IS A BIG JOKE. ANYWAY SHE IS NOT A MARY SUE!!! I'VE SEEN SOME BAD SUES AND SHE ISN'T ONE, OKAY?!! NOW, ENJOY THE FIC AND PLEASE DON'T STEAL IT BECAUSE I WOULD SO BE PISSED AT YOU. OH YEAH, POKEMON ISN'T MINE, JUST BEGBIE. PLEASE R & R.
::sigh:: Badfic everywhere, and people line up to give detailed concrit to this instead.
I don't understand why people leap on blatant trolls like that, then leave "omg plz rite more" on earnest 'fics that are, in some cases, only marginally better.
I have to admit to reading a little of the actual story and cracking up at the part where it described the pokémon as having a "ruby diamond" on its forehead.
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Date: 2006-10-31 01:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-10-31 01:44 am (UTC)::sigh:: Badfic everywhere, and people line up to give detailed concrit to this instead.
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Date: 2006-10-31 03:46 am (UTC)I have to admit to reading a little of the actual story and cracking up at the part where it described the pokémon as having a "ruby diamond" on its forehead.