You know what's worse than stupid, fawning reviews to pieces of junk? Stupid, fawning pretend constructive criticism that's full of bad advice and complements to to a piece of junk.
Yeah, TopazSoarhire did give some advice which could be useful, but this is a review to someone who didn't bother to put periods at the end of half her sentences. She doesn't need to be told how to add detail. That's not the issue. As usual, TopazSoarhire didn't even bother giving a customized review, just gave general advice that has nothing to do with the story. Plus, I'm really getting annoyed by TopazSoarhire's tendency to say 'don't do this because people might accuse you of making a sue even though she totally isn't in any way' in response to blatant sueness. And if you read her examples, you see they refer to a thirteen year old getting their first pokemon. Gah. So it's writing advice from a mediocre writer with no grasp of canon.
Re: Aerol Somtaaw, fellow author, long-time listener, first time caller
Date: 2004-07-27 12:38 pm (UTC)