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The following review has been submitted to: Pokemon Revolution Chapter: 12
From: Jon Armor Mode ()
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*to military leaders of Kanto* Let's play along for now, shutting down the Poké Ball manufacturing companies, and having trainers sell all their Poké Balls to me, to supposedly be "destroyed" and their Pokémon to me, to be "released". I will buy for the prices worth it, I think I have a way out of this. *a wall collapses, revealing a Charizard behind it; this causes everyone to gasp in fear* Behold, the Charizard Bomb! Although it looks like a Charizard, it's actually a robot! It also has cameras in its eyes, so you can remote-control it, and an H-Bomb inside it! We can fly it to Lavender Town by remote-control, and then land and detonate it! *notices a Pokémon that is identified as a spy for the revolution out the window, turns his arm into a cannon, and vaporizes it* Any questions!? *end review/not-so-subtle ideas for the story*
*beams out*
Oy...
Something tells me he's really, really missed the point - as well as the long author notes explaining the story is ALREADY WRITTEN and as such, NOT SUBJECT TO CHANGE. It's even more ironic that he reviews like this for a chapter that's about the Kanto leaders trying this very tactic and having it blow up in their face.
I wonder what it is about Pokemon Revolution that invites this kind of response. The last time around someone wrote an entire chapter for me midway through the story and emailed me with the intention of it being the next chapter. Someone else wanted to write about Ice and Wildfire from the story. Much later, after the story was done, another person took it on themself to go through the entire story and proofread it, then emailed the corrected version to me.
Additionally, anyone else think this and this seem similar?
The following review has been submitted to: Pokemon Revolution Chapter: 12
From: Jon Armor Mode ()
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*to military leaders of Kanto* Let's play along for now, shutting down the Poké Ball manufacturing companies, and having trainers sell all their Poké Balls to me, to supposedly be "destroyed" and their Pokémon to me, to be "released". I will buy for the prices worth it, I think I have a way out of this. *a wall collapses, revealing a Charizard behind it; this causes everyone to gasp in fear* Behold, the Charizard Bomb! Although it looks like a Charizard, it's actually a robot! It also has cameras in its eyes, so you can remote-control it, and an H-Bomb inside it! We can fly it to Lavender Town by remote-control, and then land and detonate it! *notices a Pokémon that is identified as a spy for the revolution out the window, turns his arm into a cannon, and vaporizes it* Any questions!? *end review/not-so-subtle ideas for the story*
*beams out*
Oy...
Something tells me he's really, really missed the point - as well as the long author notes explaining the story is ALREADY WRITTEN and as such, NOT SUBJECT TO CHANGE. It's even more ironic that he reviews like this for a chapter that's about the Kanto leaders trying this very tactic and having it blow up in their face.
I wonder what it is about Pokemon Revolution that invites this kind of response. The last time around someone wrote an entire chapter for me midway through the story and emailed me with the intention of it being the next chapter. Someone else wanted to write about Ice and Wildfire from the story. Much later, after the story was done, another person took it on themself to go through the entire story and proofread it, then emailed the corrected version to me.
Additionally, anyone else think this and this seem similar?
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Date: 2006-12-22 05:28 pm (UTC)Uh, anyhow, those stories are extremely similar. ?.? How odd....
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Date: 2006-12-27 02:55 am (UTC)