Haha, reviewers

[farla]

FFN people are reviewing Lucki. Morbane seems especially confused, but points out a problem.

I also enjoyed the part where Lucki chose a Pokémon. That sort of scene is either silly, or drawn out with great implications of destiny. Whereas one like Lucki wouldn't have that sort of time or omniscience.

Dammit!

Any advice on fixing that?

Comments

[purplekitte.livejournal.com]

Ooh, that was nice. I read the first chapter on ff.net and the rest on Serebii right after (I'm PlatinumDragoness on ff). It felt weird, being good and bad at the same time, but more and more bad went into the plot as it went along. It was really nicely down, how there was nothing specific to identify throughout much of it as cliched/badly thought out, but it all eventually came together by near the end.

One question I had was--you write wonderful parodies and critices, but do you think it's possible to write Pokemon fanfic that isn't bad/cliched, parody/dark and bloody, or boring? I don't read much of the fandom other than your stuff and I haven't written anything in years, so I don't have much experience with what's out there. Do you think it can be done and if so, do you have any examples that you like?