Butterfly Wings Ch7

[farla]

Finally done with Traverse Town! I mean, until they go back there.

Interestingly, I seem to have pretty good reader fidelity on this story, judging by the hits. It might just be the result of updating daily.

Next up, Wonderland.

Comments

[kddreams.livejournal.com]

I'm surprised you did Kingdom Hearts, because it's one of those stories that are set in stone, sorta. Unlike Pokemon where it's just write whatever, because there's not really a set story.

Well, anyway, I like it. I mean I find Kimi really annoying and a fanatic fan girl and I don't understand why she would hate Kairi or Disney... O.o.... but the idea is kinda interesting. Also, it seems like Kimi knows the game as she has played the game, but I don't really get if she's played the whole game before or if she just started a new game when she got sucked in.

Regardless of all that, I'm glad to see the NaNo going well. =]

Signed,
Fanatic Fan Girl

[farla.livejournal.com]

I like to try new things. (Also, given both of my major running stories are completely free, and given this is making them incredibly hard to write...I do learn from experience. Eventually. Somewhat. Having a set plotline makes the story much, much easier to do.)

The Kairi hate is just unbelievable. Kimi isn't even a parody - apparently people sincerely hate Kairi because she "giggles too much". And is simultaneously not interested in Riku/Sora (how dare she!), trying to break them up (how dare she!) and sleeping around with them (how dare she!). The same people hate how useless she is, except for when she gets a keyblade and stops being useless, because then she's such a mary sue. The same people. Kairi exists in a state of quantum bashing where all options are simultaneously true at the same time.

Also, it seems like Kimi knows the game as she has played the game, but I don't really get if she's played the whole game before or if she just started a new game when she got sucked in.

It'll become clearer as the fic and game storyline progress.

And thanks!