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Am working on the next chapter of Ice. It's already five pages, and there are a bunch of bits (many of which aren't complete) which, if added as they are, get it up to eleven pages. And that all together is slightly under half of the total number of scenes that are intending to go in the chapter.
Stylistically, I really like the idea of having the whole year as a single chapter...however, it's already going to be pretty long and it might wind up even longer. I'm unsure if I should try to break it up (and the immediate question that springs to mind is then 'where?' because everything just sort of flows one after another until the very-much-perfect ending - you'll understand when you see it. Or not, as the case may very well be) or if I should keep it as one block.
To distract you from this pointless ramble and the unrest the below posts may well create, as well as creating an outlet to vent any anger, I offer ( this fragment to distract you )
Imaginary cookies and promises of not reviewing your innocent story to those who respond, constructively or otherwise.
(Oh, and you don't need to read PR to understand the story. In fact, reading PR may just give you the wrong ideas and cause incorrect assumptions. Just try to take the story by itself. If it's confusing, complain!)
Stylistically, I really like the idea of having the whole year as a single chapter...however, it's already going to be pretty long and it might wind up even longer. I'm unsure if I should try to break it up (and the immediate question that springs to mind is then 'where?' because everything just sort of flows one after another until the very-much-perfect ending - you'll understand when you see it. Or not, as the case may very well be) or if I should keep it as one block.
To distract you from this pointless ramble and the unrest the below posts may well create, as well as creating an outlet to vent any anger, I offer ( this fragment to distract you )
Imaginary cookies and promises of not reviewing your innocent story to those who respond, constructively or otherwise.
(Oh, and you don't need to read PR to understand the story. In fact, reading PR may just give you the wrong ideas and cause incorrect assumptions. Just try to take the story by itself. If it's confusing, complain!)
